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Not Quite Sleeping Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Sex4lf5710/08/14

Loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter where hopefully the mom will give the sister blowjob lessons.

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by doug_nought10/08/14

Hot Damn

Another great chapter in this series! I personally loved the first 2 pages, when it was just mom and son - especially when the son is punishing the mother. Would love to read more chapters.

The only thing that struck me as odd was how the siblings kept calling each other 'bro' and 'sis' instead of their names. And how you used the word 'sis' instead of her name. Give the sister a name instead of "sis said" or "Sis noticed"

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by redlion7510/09/14

make sure they both get knocked up

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by Anonymous10/11/14

Not quite finished.

You need to make sure they both get pregnant .

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by Anonymous10/18/14

Hot story

Really nice story, hope you write more about them getting into a hot threesome or get a buddy to fuck one of them.

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by Anonymous10/21/14

One of my favorite stories on the site

This is awesome, Please keep up the good work

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by Anonymous10/23/14

Nice

This was really good, I'm looking forward to more with the sister I was wondering if that would ever happen. Keep it up!

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by jott5012/05/14

i was wondering...

was wondering when sis would get some of that dick. she would have to be awful dence to not sense what was happening in her home. mommy and john are like two horney teen agers. their late night romps probably keep her awake at night...lol...

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by Anonymous12/29/14

Fantastic Story!

Excellent story. Can't wait for the next chapter. A threesome has me so hot I can barely wait!!

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by mike250108/24/15

..The bed was a mess and smelled strongly of sex. If sis had even just opened the door to my room before she went to school we would have been found out. So far we had avoided getting caught though.

@@@ Ya know, I always read that, but we can fuck like crazy and i can come in the room later and not smell a thing, so I don't get it. @@@

Sis and me stood up as well and together we went to search the garage. We found the plastic pool at the back of a shelf, a bit pale but still whole. We went out to the lawn, inflated it and filled it up. We returned to our chairs to give the water some time to get warmer.

@@@ why the hell would you let the water warm up?! Hot day needs a cold pool!!@@@

I could hear her lock the door behind me and soon the music started up again, louder than before. So much for being grateful. Whatever. I thought and laid back down on the couch, flipping through the channels.

@@@ well for a guy fucking his mom, he isnt much of a perv if he cant even deduce that his sister shoved his ass out so she could jill off, lol!! @@@

Glad his crushing sis who luuuuuuvs him is finally in the mix! ;)

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by Anonymous08/28/15

Puzzled

What the fuck do three @'s mean? They don't get a mention in any stuff that I have.

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