All Comments on 'Could It Be? Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
*****

I like the story, the characters, and the fact you included the various languages and information about customs, etc.

Looking forward to more.

Five.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Oh my!

Where has this story been? I love it. Update SOOOOOOONNNNN!

brownskinnedcutiebrownskinnedcutieover 9 years ago
l love those two together! !

You are an amazing writer. I am rooting for Thina and Erik!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Too short!!

This chapter was way too short. Please update he next chapter asap!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
impressed and captured

As a young south african female I'm feeling very proud, excited and anxious for the couple. Interracial dating is never easy no matter which country you live in but I can't help but agree and support your skill and the direction of this story. Finally an interracial story I can relate to. Keep writing please

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great story

Would like more of this story with a happy ending.

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