... and congratulations on the publication of your first story. It was very readable and I look forward to more chapters soon. Well done, five stars and thank you for sharing your talent with us.
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10/11/14
Yes....
So looking forward to the next chapter.............!
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Anonymous10/11/14
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i too enjoyed very much this story,, and look forward to its development xxx well done and thank you for taking the time to write creatively
This was a very eloquent first entry. It did well at holding my attention. It contained a few flow issues, and definitely needed a proof read... (Brackets are distracting, words like "inventorying" make people roll their eyes, and randomly jumping from one scene to the next with no flow between the two is jarring)... but other than that, it wasn't half bad. I'll keep reading to see if you grow as you continue.
Hi poeticlicense91,
Okay, I'm long overdue to read your story but, as they say, "better late than never." So, our Philly girls are getting into a little trouble. I can't wait to read the rest of your story. It was an interesting prelude and grabbed my attention right from the start.
Five Stars!
SoCalCynic: Yes. I ended up moving the whole series over to non-con. I'd say that the confusion is part of the character development. I'd ask you to read and see!
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Welcome to Literotica, poeticlicense91...
... and congratulations on the publication of your first story. It was very readable and I look forward to more chapters soon. Well done, five stars and thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Yes....
So looking forward to the next chapter.............!
mmmmm
i too enjoyed very much this story,, and look forward to its development xxx well done and thank you for taking the time to write creatively
CHORDS TO BIND MAKES ONE A PRODIGY
cords to bind makes one a pervert. TK U MLJ LV NV
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This was a very eloquent first entry. It did well at holding my attention. It contained a few flow issues, and definitely needed a proof read... (Brackets are distracting, words like "inventorying" make people roll their eyes, and randomly jumping from one scene to the next with no flow between the two is jarring)... but other than that, it wasn't half bad. I'll keep reading to see if you grow as you continue.
Great start
Looking forward to the rest. Thank you for sharing
Attention grabber!
Hi poeticlicense91,
Okay, I'm long overdue to read your story but, as they say, "better late than never." So, our Philly girls are getting into a little trouble. I can't wait to read the rest of your story. It was an interesting prelude and grabbed my attention right from the start.
Five Stars!
Chat soon,
Apple *; )
p.s. hope all is well
Somewhere Between BDSM and Non-con?
You have some possibility as a writer, but there is no distinction between consensual and Non-consensual contact.
Between places
SoCalCynic: Yes. I ended up moving the whole series over to non-con. I'd say that the confusion is part of the character development. I'd ask you to read and see!
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