It was brief and well-written. You got right into the story and I enjoyed it very much. Good description and good visuals.
It's nice to see a change of pace from a hot girl showing off to give football studs. It was fun to throw in an older, fat couple. That makes things interesting.
Well-done!
It was brief and well-written. You got right into the story and I enjoyed it very much. Good description and good visuals.
It's nice to see a change of pace from a hot girl showing off to give football studs. It was fun to throw in an older, fat couple. That makes things interesting.
Good job!
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