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Point of fact
Least you could do is learn to spell "DEVIANT."
Cuckold sissy
As I said in my other comment, to many loose strings. Names would help. Will there be more stories about this sissy slut? Is cuckold fucking and sucking at work now too? Anyone take pictures of this? So many loose ends.
Further explanation
It has loose ends thanks to the incompetent author, the one who can't spell "deviant" and couldn't write a good story to save their life. So they write their own jackoff fantasy off the top of their head and call it a "story."
Devient spelling
Couple thoughts, I spelled my name the way I did because the proper way of spelling it was already being used. So I improvised, it's kind of like being a sissy, you know what it is meant to be, but it looks different.
As for my story, it's my first attempt, ever, at writing a story. Yes, it is a fantasy, but isn't every story on here someone's fantasy? Loose ends, please explain, don't be a sissy cray baby and complain without giving examples.
loved this story
Please tell us more. Please continue this sexual adventure of a sissy husband who has a slutty wife. I too am a sissy husband and I truly wish my wife knew about my CD adventures. It would be so hot to go out to dinner with my male lover and have my wife at the next table. I know she'd call me a "sissy", a "faggot" and a "cum-swallowing cock-sucker". Yes, I am all that -- and more. I also wish my employees would see me dressed up and use me like you got used by your employees. Maybe I'll circulate this story throughout the company and see what happens. Wish me luck !!!
Offer to be an Editor
Hey, I, just like you, started out a bit rough with writing and one of the things I have found that helps is the use of an editor. Someone to help you look out for spelling and language issues, questions the reader might have and structure. If you would like some help, I would be more than willing to do that. A lot of people on here take the low road and just anonymously bash and that can definitely deter someone from trying to improve. If you are interested, my contact info is in my profile.
What if this unnamed
It would be hot in that chapter to see the man's man (The name is not known to me) be with the cuckhold (Since I do not know his name) and his wife. He can turn the cuckhold into his girl as well as be with his wife to show both of them off. Breast Implants for both of them and hormones and blonde hair for the cuckold.
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