First part? Quit while you're ahead. You can't write!
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Anonymous11/30/14
More coming?
It's an interesting and unique start, I would be like to see where you go in terms of group dynamics and all around character development. Look forward to the next piece, however I hope it has a bit more length and introspective to it.
English
OK
Huh?
Great story...
quite short
More to cum ...
The first installment of a multi-part story ...
Garbage
First part? Quit while you're ahead. You can't write!
More coming?
It's an interesting and unique start, I would be like to see where you go in terms of group dynamics and all around character development. Look forward to the next piece, however I hope it has a bit more length and introspective to it.
Hell yeah
Fucking love it, the shame, the humiliation.
I also love the white guy jerking in the bathroom, terrified and turned on. Been there lol
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