All Comments on 'Those Eyes Alone Pt. 02'

by MzSapphiria

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ariesgirlariesgirlover 9 years ago

Nate will have to keep reassuring Trys that he will not take Keaton back. She is still insecure but hopefully soon she will trust him.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

I like. I wish it could be longer. Thanks for the update

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Love it but......

Are you going to finish in submission to??? Can't leave me hanging lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I had to do a double take, lol! Thanks sooo much for updating! Loved it as usual. It looks as though Keaton will be a problem; she accepted Nathan's wishes without hesitation. Now I am sure there are some people who would feel crappy but would accept it if they were told what Nathan told Keaton, but Keaton is not some people. She has a plan.

Please update Venice Lover. I love that story so much and it's barely begun. Ugh, you're such a good writer. I've read that story so many times trying to think of what the next chapter would be like.

chocolatesistachocolatesistaover 9 years ago
i love your story

Take care of yourself and yours but do hurry back please. Your writing is the bees knees.

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