as i read the story i was reminded about the time i was living at home town.
my dad had died in a car accident a year before, i was 16 then....one day i was going theu a adult mag and jacking off, suddenly i realized that mom had enterred my room and was watching....i didn't know what to say or do....then she smiled and said.....david , your are a big boy now !! and she left...
hearing that i felt a sudden urge to grab her and kiss her....i always had the secret crush on her...like most of guy have...
i didn't know what she had in her mind then ???
by
Anonymous07/16/15
Great story
Great story, don't care if it's true or not. It's good
by
Anonymous07/24/15
Good story make a sequel
by
Anonymous07/31/15
Why
I just won't to know why the mother said to go fuck your sister??? Explanation?
And it got a bit stupid when the friends mum suck her son off O_o Any way great story
by
Anonymous08/11/15
I want to come over and have fun with the lady's too.
by
Anonymous08/18/15
Sex
Do you love having SEX naked with your sister and brother do you in joy it
by
Anonymous08/19/15
please reply
sequel?
by
Anonymous08/31/15
is this created or true?
can you show your kelly and judy pic..???
by
Anonymous11/05/15
Sequel plis
Such a well written story, can you do a sequel?
by
Anonymous11/27/15
This better be made up,
Or I am calling the cops, you are cumming to jail bad boy. Get it xD
by
Anonymous11/30/15
wet..
Was anybody else extremely wet while reading this???
by
Anonymous12/18/15
OMG!
That was the dumbest story that I have ever read. I read it all the way to the end to see if it could get any more stupid and I wasn't disappointed. Do us all a favor and kill yourself.
by
Anonymous12/31/15
Im wet
Dang that was awesome
by
Anonymous01/02/16
NICE WORK
You can be an excellent erotic story writer.
Today it's 2nd time I jerked of to this
by
Anonymous01/10/16
Juvenile
This reads like it was written by an adolescent boy. It's not erotica is teen jerk off material. Just about the most amateurish garbage I have read. Started poorly and just got worse until it reached awful. Do us a favour and stick to jerking off because you ain't a writer !!!
by
Anonymous01/24/16
Too many high horses
Don't listen to the people who think they're better than everyone else just because they read their porn, this was great.
The only thing I think you could do better is pacing, can't wait for the next one
To be completely honest the only reason I gave this story 3 stars is because it was so ridiculous that it had me laughing for about 11 minutes straight.
It was so bad I was waiting for the punch line at the end.
"After I finished with the women I went out and fucked our horse"...or something incredibly stupid like that.
I was playing with my phone typed in Hillary Clinton anal after all the stuff on TV her being a ass and all I couldn't believe what popped up if you have any morals she sure doesn't.
by
Anonymous10/13/16
Honestly with some edits and rewrites you could turn this into an adult horror story.
now that is one fucked up story an l love it, lucky bastard, getting to have 4 ladies to fuck, while the rest of us barely get any if at all, now this story needs a better introduction, like the reasons why the mother told baby boy, what to do an so on, also to go into more depth, which means it needs several chapters, including a prequel.
by
Anonymous10/13/16
too fast on the story and each encounter should have been a bit less just let me slam you.
by
Anonymous11/07/16
10/10 IGN
Most MLG weed sWag of the centurey. Gabe is that you, Half-Life 3 confimed. 7/10 too much water. 360 quickscope git gud faze cock.
flashback
as i read the story i was reminded about the time i was living at home town.
my dad had died in a car accident a year before, i was 16 then....one day i was going theu a adult mag and jacking off, suddenly i realized that mom had enterred my room and was watching....i didn't know what to say or do....then she smiled and said.....david , your are a big boy now !! and she left...
hearing that i felt a sudden urge to grab her and kiss her....i always had the secret crush on her...like most of guy have...
i didn't know what she had in her mind then ???
Great story
Great story, don't care if it's true or not. It's good
Good story make a sequel
Why
I just won't to know why the mother said to go fuck your sister??? Explanation?
And it got a bit stupid when the friends mum suck her son off O_o Any way great story
I want to come over and have fun with the lady's too.
Sex
Do you love having SEX naked with your sister and brother do you in joy it
please reply
sequel?
is this created or true?
can you show your kelly and judy pic..???
Sequel plis
Such a well written story, can you do a sequel?
This better be made up,
Or I am calling the cops, you are cumming to jail bad boy. Get it xD
wet..
Was anybody else extremely wet while reading this???
OMG!
That was the dumbest story that I have ever read. I read it all the way to the end to see if it could get any more stupid and I wasn't disappointed. Do us all a favor and kill yourself.
Im wet
Dang that was awesome
NICE WORK
You can be an excellent erotic story writer.
Today it's 2nd time I jerked of to this
Juvenile
This reads like it was written by an adolescent boy. It's not erotica is teen jerk off material. Just about the most amateurish garbage I have read. Started poorly and just got worse until it reached awful. Do us a favour and stick to jerking off because you ain't a writer !!!
Too many high horses
Don't listen to the people who think they're better than everyone else just because they read their porn, this was great.
The only thing I think you could do better is pacing, can't wait for the next one
8 16 32
Good writing they each need to have baby girls so there will be 8 soon than 16
not good
That was really bad and more unrealistic than a dragon-unicorn hybrid.. Really hated it
Wow
To be completely honest the only reason I gave this story 3 stars is because it was so ridiculous that it had me laughing for about 11 minutes straight.
LOL
That was literally my first bad comment EVER. I'm glad that you tried but for the sake of the reader please put some more effort into it?
Oops!
Cool story, sound to be real
OMG
It was so bad I was waiting for the punch line at the end.
"After I finished with the women I went out and fucked our horse"...or something incredibly stupid like that.
Read this off my friends computer. Bruh 😂😂
My Dream
One of my favourite stories on here. Great Job
hillery Clinton
I was playing with my phone typed in Hillary Clinton anal after all the stuff on TV her being a ass and all I couldn't believe what popped up if you have any morals she sure doesn't.
Honestly with some edits and rewrites you could turn this into an adult horror story.
holy shit
now that is one fucked up story an l love it, lucky bastard, getting to have 4 ladies to fuck, while the rest of us barely get any if at all, now this story needs a better introduction, like the reasons why the mother told baby boy, what to do an so on, also to go into more depth, which means it needs several chapters, including a prequel.
too fast on the story and each encounter should have been a bit less just let me slam you.
10/10 IGN
Most MLG weed sWag of the centurey. Gabe is that you, Half-Life 3 confimed. 7/10 too much water. 360 quickscope git gud faze cock.
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