forensics setting murder between 9 PM and 3 AM weak on two counts... rigidity and consistency of dried blood for 1... the second is the casket opening was set at midnight.
If this was the BrutalPscyhopaths section of a website called ViciousCrimeStories.com, then I could understand why I might find a story like this one.
But this website is supposed to be a site of "erotic" stories. What exactly is supposed to be erotic about murder?
And this section, Loving Wives, is supposedly defined as "Married extra-marital fun: swinging, sharing & more". Now I can see how that definition means different things to different people, but for me I kind of focus on the word FUN. I don't see a lot of fun in this story.
Good story of a jealous wife about her husband's sexual past. I fo not tell my partner what I did in my past, if she asked I would still try to deflect the question.
What I did and with whom I can not change, same with her. That does not mean she should take revenge for something tgat happen before we meet.
Though I do know of couples were this very situation has caused problems !
Story did need a little more editing IMO.
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Anonymous10/12/14
3*s
A well written, interesting and heart tugging story. I like the creative plot mixing and police detective as the criminal and the LW protagonist. Earned 3*s plus !!
The bad was the editor, editing. I really thought you D G Hear , did not use an editor.
Great read. And the technical stuff doesn't matter, lol.
AMerryMan
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Anonymous10/12/14
I don't know about anyone else, but I can't fault DG for....
.....stories where they stay together. I'd like to see him tackle a few where they split, ranging from civilized to BTB adding (for his sake, the requisite happy ending.....for at least one of the two) just to see his "range of motion" in writing.
As to whether or not it could happen that way, well it could and does every day. Reasons vary, but without doubt the marriage is never the same again....why would it be, how could it be?
I like the writing, but don't always like the story. Mostly I do. Use what you can and move ahead, DG....everything else is just newsprint.
If anyone knows anything about the job, especially in a larger city then you know that death does not bother some of them for very long. The ones it does bother leave the force. As far as contradictions in killing the friend and waffling in hurting the wife, you learn to compartmentalize emotions. Family goes into a totally separate box in your head. Hard to transition one set of contents into another. That's what keeps them sane or at least functionally insane. Now, a really good Halloween story would have been him putting her in the coffin with Dean unhurt but gagged. This would have given her an idea of the possible consequences. It would appear that she didn't have that much of a problem keeping her "little" secret until the tapes started showing up.
I think that the reason she didn't come clean to her husband was shock at first then the realization that he was the one who did it. After hearing more about what he faced in his job she became worried that she would be the next Halloween party favor/table centerpiece. So very well written. I usually don't like DG Hear's RAAC stories that much. They are all well written, I just believe in accountability. This one had just enough edge to make it fun and not so hard to digest.
Read some more comments, especially about stopping her from actually fucking Dean. "What kind of husband watches his wife fuck another man and doesn't try to stop her". Well, I think that he is the kind of man that knows that if the wife doesn't stop it on her own she will most likely do it again, whether she claims coercion or not. If she was mature enough to stop doing it, she wouldn't have done it in the first place, maybe, but it has to be her. Cheap whore too, traded marriage for a handful of magic beans, so to speak.
This cheating whore sells herself not once but twice. Oh, I forgot, she was mad at her husband because they couldn't afford a car and he did some wild things before he met her. I guess those are good reasons to cheat and sell yourself. So after this fool takes her back, she can go cheat every time she doesn't get her way or gets mad at him. What a loving couple they would be. But wait, she loves him so much. If the husband had to work a couple hours longer and he didn't catch them, how much longer would this have gone on...who knows. I am not dead set against reconciliation stories, but this is not a good candidate. She was a liar, a cheat, a whore and completely untrustworthy.
Killing Dean turned it off for me. I've watched a lot of crime shows. It's next to impossible to get away with murder and even if you did manage to get off scot free, there's always going to be that "what if" factor. You'll always be looking over your shoulder. It could be 20 years later and you'd still be doing it. A better revenge would be to use your career to make life very difficult for Dean. Joe should've warned Megan before about his college buddies so that this whole mess could've been avoided. He should've told her about Dean and his threat to fuck her. He wanted to keep her separated from that part of his life and to keep her innocent. That's all well and good but she deserved to be aware of his friends. Yes, this is partly Joe's fault. He had the ability to protect her better but he let what happened happen.
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Anonymous03/27/15
you can't stop her!
Some responders say,"why didn't he stop her?" My answer..... she's an adult. If she can't control herself, make up her own mind then she's a lost cause. Also, even if you as a husband are so inclined, you can't watch her 24/7 and even if you could, it's not HER but YOU who is the one keeping her in line and not she herself. Only a child needs constant supervision and those of you who suggest that their wives be closely monitored are pathetically mistaken and this is the very reason that when it comes to cheating, making a clean break with a divorce ensures that you won't have to try to watch your whore wife 24/7. Also, the pathetic excuse that you must "think of the kids" doesn't fly because (1) children are resilient and can bounce back from divorce and (2) what's worse..... children suffering from the pain of divorce or suffering the pain of constant bickering, recriminations, arguing, mistrust, suspicion and accusations caused by the cheating? Think about it!!!
wouldn't you think that, if there is something in your past that could effect your marriage in the future or present, you should let the other person know? what's the difference between immature, and mature, innocence and knowledge? she gave into blackmail, that's innocence. she recognized her mistake, I think she grew up a bit. the story was well written, nice job.
This is a terrible cuck story..... Husband has no balls. Its also clear that you have never been cheated on, because betrayal burns away a ton of the love one has for a cheating spouse.
What can I say ? I have read a lot of your stories and have enjoyed the ones I have read. What I do wonder about is why the husband didn't do something to his wife in order to insure that she wouldn't screw anyone else again or at lease make her feel so guilty that she wouldn't do it again. And why he was such a wimp when it came to his cheating wife. But all-in-all a good story.
But I really hated the ending. I simply don't see him NOT divorcing her. My problem is this - he's SO emotional about her cheating that he kills another man. What makes him calm enough to accept his cheating wife's actions? The two actions just don't fit together in the same man. Had he killed Dean and then tossed his slut wife out, that would have made emotional sense. Your ending did not. She can't control herself and there would have been no way he could have ignored her actions and trusted her again. Sans trust, there can be no marriage. Good story, truly horrible ending.
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Anonymous02/02/16
1 jeeeez
"Oh crap Dean is blackmailing the love of my life for sex, oh no he is bending her over the couch to fuck her" grrrr what should I do? I'll just let him, that way I can be mad and hurt and lose my wife when I divorce her" give me a break!! Poor poor offering by the author. Sinstalker2
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Anonymous06/09/16
1 star
A woman that would be a whore for a $600 loan and betray her marriage and family is seriously too fucking stupid to be married!
He really should have divorced her skanky ass!
by
Anonymous06/09/16
5
great LW story. Anony is an asshole of the nth degree,.
by
Anonymous06/09/16
1*
Vote 1* for 𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐅𝐀𝐓 𝐃𝐔𝐌𝐁 𝐓𝐑𝐀𝐍𝐍𝐘 𝐖𝐇𝐎𝐑𝐄™ (that's what her clients call her) aka BONNIE/VASTIE aka ANON!
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Anonymous10/18/16
POS story
Mad enough to kill his friend for fucking his slut wife and then stays married to her? Fucking stupid. 1* because there's nothing lower.
The husband should have confronted megan and dean at party site before intercourse. It would have shut dean down and dealt with wife. He could have beat the dean down and not go to reunion. He and megan could rebuild their marriage and move on. Now you have murder and cheating along with lieing.
English
good... needs better editor
forensics setting murder between 9 PM and 3 AM weak on two counts... rigidity and consistency of dried blood for 1... the second is the casket opening was set at midnight.
I Don't Get It
If this was the BrutalPscyhopaths section of a website called ViciousCrimeStories.com, then I could understand why I might find a story like this one.
But this website is supposed to be a site of "erotic" stories. What exactly is supposed to be erotic about murder?
And this section, Loving Wives, is supposedly defined as "Married extra-marital fun: swinging, sharing & more". Now I can see how that definition means different things to different people, but for me I kind of focus on the word FUN. I don't see a lot of fun in this story.
Halloween is coming. ..!
Good story of a jealous wife about her husband's sexual past. I fo not tell my partner what I did in my past, if she asked I would still try to deflect the question.
What I did and with whom I can not change, same with her. That does not mean she should take revenge for something tgat happen before we meet.
Though I do know of couples were this very situation has caused problems !
Story did need a little more editing IMO.
3*s
A well written, interesting and heart tugging story. I like the creative plot mixing and police detective as the criminal and the LW protagonist. Earned 3*s plus !!
The bad was the editor, editing. I really thought you D G Hear , did not use an editor.
Great read. And the technical stuff doesn't matter, lol.
AMerryMan
I don't know about anyone else, but I can't fault DG for....
.....stories where they stay together. I'd like to see him tackle a few where they split, ranging from civilized to BTB adding (for his sake, the requisite happy ending.....for at least one of the two) just to see his "range of motion" in writing.
As to whether or not it could happen that way, well it could and does every day. Reasons vary, but without doubt the marriage is never the same again....why would it be, how could it be?
I like the writing, but don't always like the story. Mostly I do. Use what you can and move ahead, DG....everything else is just newsprint.
Boring
I gave 1 star..
Story drama
1). As a guess, him watching Dean fuck his wife does add some vouyeristic interest.
2). The murder did seem excessively risky
3). Ivy League grads occasionally do join police forces, and start out as beat cops, but they are on a fast track to rise to police commissioner.
4). Nothing about the protagonist sounded like he had much ambition, nor was very smart, so he didn't fit his own bio.
Not a bad story
Policeman.
If anyone knows anything about the job, especially in a larger city then you know that death does not bother some of them for very long. The ones it does bother leave the force. As far as contradictions in killing the friend and waffling in hurting the wife, you learn to compartmentalize emotions. Family goes into a totally separate box in your head. Hard to transition one set of contents into another. That's what keeps them sane or at least functionally insane. Now, a really good Halloween story would have been him putting her in the coffin with Dean unhurt but gagged. This would have given her an idea of the possible consequences. It would appear that she didn't have that much of a problem keeping her "little" secret until the tapes started showing up.
I think that the reason she didn't come clean to her husband was shock at first then the realization that he was the one who did it. After hearing more about what he faced in his job she became worried that she would be the next Halloween party favor/table centerpiece. So very well written. I usually don't like DG Hear's RAAC stories that much. They are all well written, I just believe in accountability. This one had just enough edge to make it fun and not so hard to digest.
Addendum 1
Read some more comments, especially about stopping her from actually fucking Dean. "What kind of husband watches his wife fuck another man and doesn't try to stop her". Well, I think that he is the kind of man that knows that if the wife doesn't stop it on her own she will most likely do it again, whether she claims coercion or not. If she was mature enough to stop doing it, she wouldn't have done it in the first place, maybe, but it has to be her. Cheap whore too, traded marriage for a handful of magic beans, so to speak.
I don't get it!
This cheating whore sells herself not once but twice. Oh, I forgot, she was mad at her husband because they couldn't afford a car and he did some wild things before he met her. I guess those are good reasons to cheat and sell yourself. So after this fool takes her back, she can go cheat every time she doesn't get her way or gets mad at him. What a loving couple they would be. But wait, she loves him so much. If the husband had to work a couple hours longer and he didn't catch them, how much longer would this have gone on...who knows. I am not dead set against reconciliation stories, but this is not a good candidate. She was a liar, a cheat, a whore and completely untrustworthy.
1 star he is s hurt but doees nothing
or the writer cant writer, it self out of a wet paper bag.
THE MONSTER MASH BECKONS
and not only at Hallows-Eve. TK U MLJ LV NV
Good story but...
Killing Dean turned it off for me. I've watched a lot of crime shows. It's next to impossible to get away with murder and even if you did manage to get off scot free, there's always going to be that "what if" factor. You'll always be looking over your shoulder. It could be 20 years later and you'd still be doing it. A better revenge would be to use your career to make life very difficult for Dean. Joe should've warned Megan before about his college buddies so that this whole mess could've been avoided. He should've told her about Dean and his threat to fuck her. He wanted to keep her separated from that part of his life and to keep her innocent. That's all well and good but she deserved to be aware of his friends. Yes, this is partly Joe's fault. He had the ability to protect her better but he let what happened happen.
you can't stop her!
Some responders say,"why didn't he stop her?" My answer..... she's an adult. If she can't control herself, make up her own mind then she's a lost cause. Also, even if you as a husband are so inclined, you can't watch her 24/7 and even if you could, it's not HER but YOU who is the one keeping her in line and not she herself. Only a child needs constant supervision and those of you who suggest that their wives be closely monitored are pathetically mistaken and this is the very reason that when it comes to cheating, making a clean break with a divorce ensures that you won't have to try to watch your whore wife 24/7. Also, the pathetic excuse that you must "think of the kids" doesn't fly because (1) children are resilient and can bounce back from divorce and (2) what's worse..... children suffering from the pain of divorce or suffering the pain of constant bickering, recriminations, arguing, mistrust, suspicion and accusations caused by the cheating? Think about it!!!
nice story
wouldn't you think that, if there is something in your past that could effect your marriage in the future or present, you should let the other person know? what's the difference between immature, and mature, innocence and knowledge? she gave into blackmail, that's innocence. she recognized her mistake, I think she grew up a bit. the story was well written, nice job.
This is a terrible cuck story..... Husband has no balls. Its also clear that you have never been cheated on, because betrayal burns away a ton of the love one has for a cheating spouse.
what can I say
What can I say ? I have read a lot of your stories and have enjoyed the ones I have read. What I do wonder about is why the husband didn't do something to his wife in order to insure that she wouldn't screw anyone else again or at lease make her feel so guilty that she wouldn't do it again. And why he was such a wimp when it came to his cheating wife. But all-in-all a good story.
The crown prince of cuckland
DG Hear, (should be DGCuck) strikes again.
Another well written story
But I really hated the ending. I simply don't see him NOT divorcing her. My problem is this - he's SO emotional about her cheating that he kills another man. What makes him calm enough to accept his cheating wife's actions? The two actions just don't fit together in the same man. Had he killed Dean and then tossed his slut wife out, that would have made emotional sense. Your ending did not. She can't control herself and there would have been no way he could have ignored her actions and trusted her again. Sans trust, there can be no marriage. Good story, truly horrible ending.
1 jeeeez
"Oh crap Dean is blackmailing the love of my life for sex, oh no he is bending her over the couch to fuck her" grrrr what should I do? I'll just let him, that way I can be mad and hurt and lose my wife when I divorce her" give me a break!! Poor poor offering by the author. Sinstalker2
1 star
A woman that would be a whore for a $600 loan and betray her marriage and family is seriously too fucking stupid to be married!
He really should have divorced her skanky ass!
5
great LW story. Anony is an asshole of the nth degree,.
1*
Vote 1* for 𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐅𝐀𝐓 𝐃𝐔𝐌𝐁 𝐓𝐑𝐀𝐍𝐍𝐘 𝐖𝐇𝐎𝐑𝐄™ (that's what her clients call her) aka BONNIE/VASTIE aka ANON!
POS story
Mad enough to kill his friend for fucking his slut wife and then stays married to her? Fucking stupid. 1* because there's nothing lower.
DG Cuck
At his nauseating worst.
Too gruesome.
what a pathetic asshole he is
once a cheat...always a cheat.....she will soon be back to her old tricks...should have dumped the skank
Tempting fate
The husband should have confronted megan and dean at party site before intercourse. It would have shut dean down and dealt with wife. He could have beat the dean down and not go to reunion. He and megan could rebuild their marriage and move on. Now you have murder and cheating along with lieing.
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