Brothers Pt. 12

Did not expect this ending

I was disappointed at how it ended. I though maybe they would have taken the dad. Although I was not surprised that Jesse left him like he did.

Wow! Can't wait for the sequel.

No!!

Was that really the last chapter?? What the hell!

whatttt

i legit almost cried when i read the last line
i mean how could jesse do that? michael was so in love it made me hurt right along side him
awesome story tho its really hard to make ppl get completely immersed in a love story erotica like you did i was hooked from the first two pages

You made me cry.

So sad made my heart hurt. It was an ending rooted in reality. Another tiny observation I was under the impression that anal sex was lube lube and more lube. I could get lost in your storytelling if there wasn't a voice in my head asking where's the lube. Now I'm going to read your other story yippee

Oh wow..

It's sad to see that Mike & Jess are forced to be apart by that asshole of a father! Jess wanted to ease Mike's pain of seeing him go back with their douche of a dad. I was hoping that the father was a closet case and was secretly hooking up with Mike's teacher..but that's not how the story is set up.

Can't wait for the next series to post!

Amazing

This was really a awesome story. I can't wait for the sequel! Please hurry it up, I can't wait any longer!!

1 month

It's been almost a month now, how much longer will it take?

This ending made my eyes tear up ...

Really, what is Jess thinking?
Well, this is what - I - think; it's just my opinion (for what it's worth) ...
We went through Michael's introspection, and learned about Jesse's being gay and his fears that their parents find out; his self-hatred and his fear that Mike will also hate him - I think most of all, Jesse is scared Michael will despise and reject him. He looks up to him!
Of course, all this and Michael's being in denial (regarding his own sexuality and his love for Jesse) is nothing more than the outcome of their parents' brainwashing through the years - the gender binary bull ...
Obviously Michael would try to convince himself he isn't gay, and the stuff at the locker room after the games, it was just "to blow off steam", because it's so hard to find a girl friend ...
Now that that disgusting excuse for a father showed up, bashed his older son twice, AND found out about their being gay (**cripes ...!!!) AND incestuous (**bloody hell ...!!!), after mounting steakout at their house during the night - what I think happened was, the fucking bastard blackmailed Jesse, away from his brother's hearing: either he goes back with him, or .... he does something to Michael .... he takes his allowance away, he makes it so that he won't have a house to live in anymore or a Uni to go to ... hell, anything to screw his life!! Or maybe he sends Jesse to bible camp once more !
Well, this only my opinion: I've read this (now)12 part story a few times and I love it - it's hot and sweet. I just hope the two brothers find each other again, and tell their daddy-o to go screw himself. ^^

Amazing Story

This was an amazing story, and the ending made me want to cry (never in a million years did I think a story on this website could do that to me). I really grew to enjoy both of their characters and I so badly wanted this to work out in their favor. Can't wait for the sequel series!

I knew it

Jeese was so uneasy threw this part i saw it coming but i didnt want it to happen