Life Is Better Than Fiction

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I have difficulty saying that under the circumstances of the story line it was probably okay to make love before her divorce was final. I liked the story as such. Good writing, Tejas. Cheers!

Thank you...

I enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for sharing.

Why do people get more hung up on people dating outside of an existing marriage than they do over DATING A STUDENT? There's a serious power imbalance issue there, in addition to running afoul of professional ethics and, probably, university policy.

Also? Holy way too fast, Batman. Just straight up moving in together after maybe 4 dates?

Well written

Nice flow, albeit a rather quick match up. I wish you'd speak your dialog out loud and realize that it's sometime rather stilted. People rarely speak in grammatically correct sentences. You're rather than you are, we're going rather than we are going, etc. You're an accomplished story teller and I admire your work.

Good story but

Great story but try writing dialog that uses contractions. When people talk they don't use correct grammar, so when you try to write dialog with correct grammar it sounds stilted. But overall good job.

belaboring morality...on a porn site?

Now I've certainly earned my bad reputation for gleefully harrowing the dead language of academic english.

However, for this particular story, as written by TexasFarmBoy, the two main characters of Bob and Phyll dialogue. I personally know people, who are upper-middle class, educated, academics and lawyers, who do talk grammatically correct, in Real Life.

Perhaps the other commentators need to associate with someone besides their small circle of barfly acquaintances?

Excellent story with believable characters. Notwithstanding the earlier comments, there are a few folks out there who make an effort to speak properly ....
Thanks for the entertainment

*smh*

I echo the sentiments of your other commenters, except for the (predictably) anonymous detractor who couldn't find anything constructively negative to say, so ended up making a fool of him/herself with that inane comment about contractions. I hope you filed that comment in the cyber circular bin.