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Hypnotist Next Door Ch. 01

bySheriffBart©
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by Anonymous

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by spankingfunfor10/13/14

One Mom One Shrink = Two Willing Sluts!

Great Story! Mom , willing slave to her Son, Master Mark and their Shrink, a part-time Fucktoy for Master Mark, and Mom's Mistress would be Hell of a Novella1

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by SheriffBart10/13/14

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I've got about five more chapters in store. :-)

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by digdaddyrich10/13/14

A good start

I hope he doesn't pimp her out to all of his friends, and keep her all to himself.

I'll be looking for the next chapter.

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by Anonymous10/14/14

Master Son

Hope you keep mom for her son only and of course add the neighbor. Have him learn hypnosis and use it on the neighbor.

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by SyrustheVirus10/30/14

Good start but it will be ruined when you have him share her

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by Anonymous01/30/15

Its going wrong

You started good. Divorce, therapy for various reasons, next door neighbor providing the service. She's hot herself. Convinces Mark that to solve her body image problems, nicotine addiction, and sexual frustrations that he should provide stud service. All well and good. Then you introduce her as a Sub, which is perilous to do with a teenager who will have underdeveloped sense of judgement, self-control, and responsibility. After all this you have the Dr. to give him permission to beat her, humiliate her, and pimp her out to his friends. Are you stupid or what? I'm afraid I just can't read anymore of your corroded imagination. How could, even in fantasy, you give even a fictional teenage boy permission to mistreat any woman much less his own mother?Less than 20yrs old, he will still need her guidance at times and he will have no respect for her authority since you have just jerked it out from under her. You know, impressionable minds read these sites also and might try to put into practice what you write from fantasy.

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