while i love the slow erotic build-up 3 chapter's . the sex part was to short . had to read again if he did go down on her ? the sex it's self was two pumps & out !
it seems you took us to the top of the mountain , then took a cable car down.
Sex to short? What does that mean in English? Are you quoting your wife, girlfriend, mother, and/or mother-in-law when they complain that you're cock is too short? Is that what you were trying to write when you couldn't write a 3 word response? How dare you? Jesus Christ, don't get me started (lol).
I write a 3 chapter 18,000 word story and you can't write a 3 word sentence without making a grammatical error. Are you kidding me? Yet, my sex scent is to short or did you mean, too short?
Think about it. The first time sex with his mother, do you think they're going to be having sex for hours? Just because you stayed in bed with your mother the entire weekend, not everyone is the same.
If you want a story with a longer sex scene and not much else, go read one of the many writers who only write pornography. I write erotica. This is as good as it gets when reading erotica. The premise is that you're supposed to use your imagination. I show and you imagine the rest. Whereas, with pornography they tell you everything, that is, except for a plot, description, dialogue, imagery, tension, and a real story.
You know, we writers write stories for your entertainment for free. Literotica does not pay us to write stories. We write for nothing, zero, zilch, not a dime. And what do most of you do, 499 out of 500, don't even vote after reading the story. If I was singing a song for you, would you not clap for me? If I was serving you food, would you not tip me? If I was removing my clothes, would you not cheer me on to take it all off? Then, why in the Hell don't you vote for my stories? I don't get it.
At the very end of the story, is it too much for you to move the mouse over one of the stars to vote. Let me help you. After you read the story, without touching any stars, drag your mouse under the stars all the way over to the write, now vote. That's a 5 vote, the highest vote.
The only readers who vote all the frigging time, every time, are the bashers, those readers who can't write a lousy 3 word sentence without making an error in grammar.
"Fuck!"
I really don't know why I bother writing stories. What we writers do for your personal entertainment is not appreciated. If you appreciated what we do for you for free, for nothing, the very least you'd do is to vote for the frigging story. Then, God forbid you should leave a comment, other than a bashing comment. With only 1 in 500 to 1,000 readers voting, only 1 in 10,000 readers leaves a comment.
I'm tired. I'm cranky. I apologize for my outburst but I feel better. I write because I must but it would be really rewarding for me if readers would at least vote for my stories. If all the readers who sent me e-mails asking for my picture would only vote for my story, perhaps I'd earn some money by winning a contest.
Yes, that's right. All of my stories are contest stories. Do you know how many contest stories I've one out of the 1,500 stories I've written here? None, not one.
The only contests I win here are the year long Survivor contest where the writer with the most stories written in the most categories wins. Do you know why I win those contests? Because the winner is not determined by votes, just by the quantity of stories.
So, do me a favor. Vote for my stories. I'll love you. Your mother will love you. And your dog will love you.
Just to let you know that I enjoy your stories and always vote on them. When I do vote, it's almost always a five star response, perhaps one in twenty a four star.
Bully for me!
Anyway, I'm sure I'm not the only one. There's plenty of readers who do appreciate your stories. As for people who don't know the difference between to, too and two, let alone realise that stories are supposed to have a plot, well they're the ones that zero or one stars from me.
I look forward to the next chapter.
Cheers
I really did enjoy your story and loved the nice, measured pace as she allows him to proceed farther and farther along. And as someone who's written many stories here, I also got a pleasant feeling reading your comment. You're a fine writer--and I'm sure your work here is enjoyed by many others.
Not only do I love your story, but I think your comment is even better. Like you I don't understand how anyone can read a free story and not vote. A comment is nice, even a short one: bad grammer, spelling awful, good plot, and even too short are all helpful to authors.
I wonder if the people who read a free story and don't vote are the same people who buy an expensive meal, make a big mess, then walk out after leaving a $4 tip.
I'm going to do something that most other writers don't do.
After telling the story from the son's point of view, in chapter four, I'm going to tell the story from the mother's point of view. I'm going to show you all that the mother is thinking while her son thinks he's seducing her. If only he knew she was the one seducing him.
Well, this is your chance to influence the story. Don't be shy. Tell me. What would you like to read in chapter four that you haven't read in chapters 1-3?
What would you like me to show you that you'd yet to see and that may shock you, intrigue you, and sexually excite you?
"Mom? I mean Dad. Seriously? You had a sex change operation? When?"
Or
"Your identical twin sister is coming to visit too? And she wants us all to sleep in the same bed?"
Maybe it's just enough if I told chapter four through the mother's eyes to show you what she was thinking when her son thought he was taking sexual advantage of her. Maybe that would give you some insight into what a woman really things. Wouldn't some of you be surprised to know that most women are just as horny as men. Most women aren't the innocent virgins you think they are (lol), not by a long shot. Most women are sluts and whores but want you all to think differently so that when things go sideways, we can still point the finger at you for your bad and inappropriate behavior.
"How dare you force me to suck you while I was sleeping? Oh my God, you're such a pig. How dare you take all of those nasty, naked photos of me and post them on the Internet? I'm so very embarrassed. So, um, how did I look? How dare you barge in the bathroom with your three friends and open the shower curtain? I'm mortified, embarrassed, and humiliated, kind of, a little bit, actually not at all really. How dare you force me to have gangbang sex with your friends...over and over and over again?"
Well, tell me what you want to read in chapter four and I'll write it.
While the son was fingering his mom he could have also put his fingers under his nose and sniffed it and inhaled his dear mom's excited musky pussy scent. And the mom quite embarrassed at what he did and told him about it.
Also please continue calling her a mom, it is more exciting and incestuously wicked.
It is also very excited to know that the dad and sister know nothing about it. But it could progress to eventually the whole family will become involve in incest.
Hi Susan, since you asked, my preference would be this: Maybe it's just enough if I told chapter four through the mother's eyes to show you what she was thinking when her son thought he was taking sexual advantage of her. Maybe that would give you some insight into what a woman really things.
Susan, it would be exciting and wickedly thrilling to include while the son and Mother feels naughty naked, the son slowly walking around the house with the Mom's arms around the son's neck and her legs wrapped around his hips and the son's hard cock buried deep in his dear Mom's pussy.
Then the phone rings...The son being so naughty won't let her come down so she has to answer the phone while riding on him.
It' s the Dad on the other line. It would be so exciting that while she lovingly talk with her husband she is impaled at her son's cock. The son will also have to talk to his dad. If only the dad knew that while talking to his wife and son that their genitals were connected.
They can talk something like if the husband asks where is their son, the mom would say..." He is inside...( then mouthted to her son...ME...) then continue saying...in his room.
You can add some more flowery and exciting words and phrases Susan.
I feel this is great story . All three chapters are 5 stars . I honestly hope that you continue with a chapter 4 and may be more . Don't let the assayers get you down. Keep up the good work .
English
sex to short.
while i love the slow erotic build-up 3 chapter's . the sex part was to short . had to read again if he did go down on her ? the sex it's self was two pumps & out !
it seems you took us to the top of the mountain , then took a cable car down.
Sex to short? What does that mean in English?
Sex to short? What does that mean in English? Are you quoting your wife, girlfriend, mother, and/or mother-in-law when they complain that you're cock is too short? Is that what you were trying to write when you couldn't write a 3 word response? How dare you? Jesus Christ, don't get me started (lol).
I write a 3 chapter 18,000 word story and you can't write a 3 word sentence without making a grammatical error. Are you kidding me? Yet, my sex scent is to short or did you mean, too short?
Think about it. The first time sex with his mother, do you think they're going to be having sex for hours? Just because you stayed in bed with your mother the entire weekend, not everyone is the same.
If you want a story with a longer sex scene and not much else, go read one of the many writers who only write pornography. I write erotica. This is as good as it gets when reading erotica. The premise is that you're supposed to use your imagination. I show and you imagine the rest. Whereas, with pornography they tell you everything, that is, except for a plot, description, dialogue, imagery, tension, and a real story.
You know, we writers write stories for your entertainment for free. Literotica does not pay us to write stories. We write for nothing, zero, zilch, not a dime. And what do most of you do, 499 out of 500, don't even vote after reading the story. If I was singing a song for you, would you not clap for me? If I was serving you food, would you not tip me? If I was removing my clothes, would you not cheer me on to take it all off? Then, why in the Hell don't you vote for my stories? I don't get it.
At the very end of the story, is it too much for you to move the mouse over one of the stars to vote. Let me help you. After you read the story, without touching any stars, drag your mouse under the stars all the way over to the write, now vote. That's a 5 vote, the highest vote.
The only readers who vote all the frigging time, every time, are the bashers, those readers who can't write a lousy 3 word sentence without making an error in grammar.
"Fuck!"
I really don't know why I bother writing stories. What we writers do for your personal entertainment is not appreciated. If you appreciated what we do for you for free, for nothing, the very least you'd do is to vote for the frigging story. Then, God forbid you should leave a comment, other than a bashing comment. With only 1 in 500 to 1,000 readers voting, only 1 in 10,000 readers leaves a comment.
I'm tired. I'm cranky. I apologize for my outburst but I feel better. I write because I must but it would be really rewarding for me if readers would at least vote for my stories. If all the readers who sent me e-mails asking for my picture would only vote for my story, perhaps I'd earn some money by winning a contest.
Yes, that's right. All of my stories are contest stories. Do you know how many contest stories I've one out of the 1,500 stories I've written here? None, not one.
The only contests I win here are the year long Survivor contest where the writer with the most stories written in the most categories wins. Do you know why I win those contests? Because the winner is not determined by votes, just by the quantity of stories.
So, do me a favor. Vote for my stories. I'll love you. Your mother will love you. And your dog will love you.
Susan Jill Parker (real name)
Hi Susan and thanks for another great story
Just to let you know that I enjoy your stories and always vote on them. When I do vote, it's almost always a five star response, perhaps one in twenty a four star.
Bully for me!
Anyway, I'm sure I'm not the only one. There's plenty of readers who do appreciate your stories. As for people who don't know the difference between to, too and two, let alone realise that stories are supposed to have a plot, well they're the ones that zero or one stars from me.
I look forward to the next chapter.
Cheers
Well...
...someone is on their period.
HAHAHAHAHAH
k99rky, Really? Sex too short? I bet you think foreplay pertains to golf and seduction is some sort of new automobile fuel induction system.
Much better...
Now this is what I'm used to reading your stories. This got my juuiicces flowing...
loved your story and comment
I really did enjoy your story and loved the nice, measured pace as she allows him to proceed farther and farther along. And as someone who's written many stories here, I also got a pleasant feeling reading your comment. You're a fine writer--and I'm sure your work here is enjoyed by many others.
VERY GOOD STORY!
Not only do I love your story, but I think your comment is even better. Like you I don't understand how anyone can read a free story and not vote. A comment is nice, even a short one: bad grammer, spelling awful, good plot, and even too short are all helpful to authors.
I wonder if the people who read a free story and don't vote are the same people who buy an expensive meal, make a big mess, then walk out after leaving a $4 tip.
Nice Story
Love your stories!!!
I am looking forward to reading more
Their mutual education is entertaining.
thank you
There you go
You got us all worked up he made it to penetration but left us hanging just at the right time. Perfect.
Something a little more daring
I'm going to do something that most other writers don't do.
After telling the story from the son's point of view, in chapter four, I'm going to tell the story from the mother's point of view. I'm going to show you all that the mother is thinking while her son thinks he's seducing her. If only he knew she was the one seducing him.
Well, this is your chance to influence the story. Don't be shy. Tell me. What would you like to read in chapter four that you haven't read in chapters 1-3?
What would you like me to show you that you'd yet to see and that may shock you, intrigue you, and sexually excite you?
"Mom? I mean Dad. Seriously? You had a sex change operation? When?"
Or
"Your identical twin sister is coming to visit too? And she wants us all to sleep in the same bed?"
Maybe it's just enough if I told chapter four through the mother's eyes to show you what she was thinking when her son thought he was taking sexual advantage of her. Maybe that would give you some insight into what a woman really things. Wouldn't some of you be surprised to know that most women are just as horny as men. Most women aren't the innocent virgins you think they are (lol), not by a long shot. Most women are sluts and whores but want you all to think differently so that when things go sideways, we can still point the finger at you for your bad and inappropriate behavior.
"How dare you force me to suck you while I was sleeping? Oh my God, you're such a pig. How dare you take all of those nasty, naked photos of me and post them on the Internet? I'm so very embarrassed. So, um, how did I look? How dare you barge in the bathroom with your three friends and open the shower curtain? I'm mortified, embarrassed, and humiliated, kind of, a little bit, actually not at all really. How dare you force me to have gangbang sex with your friends...over and over and over again?"
Well, tell me what you want to read in chapter four and I'll write it.
SusanJillParker
Made my suggestion via email
Let me know if you don't get it.
Btw I dated many mothers.
I have no illusion to them being innocent. Boy do I have real mother stories to tell. All true!
While the son was fingering his mom he could have also put his fingers under his nose and sniffed it and inhaled his dear mom's excited musky pussy scent. And the mom quite embarrassed at what he did and told him about it.
Also please continue calling her a mom, it is more exciting and incestuously wicked.
It is also very excited to know that the dad and sister know nothing about it. But it could progress to eventually the whole family will become involve in incest.
options for part 4
Hi Susan, since you asked, my preference would be this: Maybe it's just enough if I told chapter four through the mother's eyes to show you what she was thinking when her son thought he was taking sexual advantage of her. Maybe that would give you some insight into what a woman really things.
While talking on the phone
Susan, it would be exciting and wickedly thrilling to include while the son and Mother feels naughty naked, the son slowly walking around the house with the Mom's arms around the son's neck and her legs wrapped around his hips and the son's hard cock buried deep in his dear Mom's pussy.
Then the phone rings...The son being so naughty won't let her come down so she has to answer the phone while riding on him.
It' s the Dad on the other line. It would be so exciting that while she lovingly talk with her husband she is impaled at her son's cock. The son will also have to talk to his dad. If only the dad knew that while talking to his wife and son that their genitals were connected.
They can talk something like if the husband asks where is their son, the mom would say..." He is inside...( then mouthted to her son...ME...) then continue saying...in his room.
You can add some more flowery and exciting words and phrases Susan.
I feel this is great story . All three chapters are 5 stars . I honestly hope that you continue with a chapter 4 and may be more . Don't let the assayers get you down. Keep up the good work .
Sequel
Have you written the next sequel #4?
It didn't really happen like this for me!
Every since I thought I could control my son when I was just doing some harmless teasing he has shown me who is really in control!
hope
they go further, involve dad and sis and have a great time.
well written!
awaiting
Chapter #4 and beyond
So very good!
I hope you'll continue this someday! Thank you!
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