Jack's New Job

Thank you...

What a great 1st story. It was easily worth 5 stars and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing.

amazing

Ok good sir this is the beginning of you writing here buckle down because I beg you for a sequel to this good sir please I beg you

Wahoo

That was just an awesome story! New and very different! I'm looking forward to reading more! Thank you!

Very very good story, i am hoping you will make this into a series of stories concerning our good friend, Ambassador Danner.

Cheers to you.

Wow!

So different and very sweet. Thank you so much.

Very Enjoyable

Not my usual genre, only looked in out of curiosity, but really enjoyed it. Would love to see it go further.

Unusual, to be sure.

Also, excellent to be sure.

Additional pieces about Jack's life (whether with the Altarians or other alien races) would be much appreciated!

Very nice

your story shows much promise, i look forward to your next one.

Not sure it this will become a series but very well written. :)

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Wonderful

Passion, Compassion, Communication - Celebrate Diversity

Thoroughly enjoyed it

Nicely done. Story, build up, dialog, all handled very well.

Great

Would like more of this universe

Excellent story and character!

Would like to read more of Jack and the Altarian's. I hope this becomes a series.

very nice and sweet!

Wow!

Looks like you're off to a great start! Please don't stop.

wow

i agree with them. next one please, and make it soon...

yes! more! please...

very nice work and well worth the time to read.
hoping for more of this...?

I usually skip the "Non Human" stories

I scan the New Stories nearly every day and got caught by the "Shepherd".
I liked it a lot and looked what other contributions you have given us and I found this sweet little story.
Thank you

Truly advanced technology. It does make sense, that if a 'Smart Phone' can learn, then smartly design gowns could be 'taught'! {rimshot!}

Sweet, touching, and thoroughly adorable. Bravo!

'She bleated.' I completely cracked up with laughter when I read those words

in the midst of their passion. It was so incongruent, given the context; but fit so perfectly, as well.

This was the second story I read of yours, a number of months ago. After reading most everything but the 'Shepard Series', (I left it for last), I was blown away by your talent and imagination.

You clearly have a feel for personal emotion, in both your human and non-human characters. A couple of your works have become my favorites of all time, (I have read hundreds of Lit works), and I have been consistently consuming Lit stories since shortly after the site launched.

I just finished the Shepard series and was pleasantly surprised to find a new submission added since the time I first read Jack's New Job.

I just finished A Shepard Afield, and found myself remembering how delightful Jack's tale was, so I came back for a bit of a double dip, as it were.

That, sir, is the highest form of praise I can give for your talent as it is VERY, VERY infrequent I read something a second time without a year or more passing.

Congrats, and thanks for sharing your imagination and for all the hard work it takes to produce stories of such quality.

Keep up the good work.

Regards,

GeoD

appreciation

I fun little short story. Better trade thru fucking (LoL). Great theme. If only that worked in the real world instead of greed, and power mongering. Keep it up!

Excellent

Not at all what I expected and all the better for that. Really enjoyed it, now I have to read all your other stories.

Disconcerting

I'm going to hold back my personal judgements on this because it's probably just me, but the narrative made me feel like Jack was fucking a goat and I was expecting the girls to drop pellets on him. I like your other stuff so I'll invest in the next chapter.

If the next segments are as good

this should be fun to read.

Have to agree with another commenter, moaning, crooning, and crying out were all good, but bleating was a bit disconcerting. But under the right circumstances I could probably learn to adapt. lol

Really?

You could have made it cat-girls, fox-girls, bunny-girls, or even puppy-girls... and you went with goat-girls? WTF is wrong with you? Anyway, I still liked it. Good job.