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Young Wife: Ruined Ch. 03

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by Master_falcon9010/13/14

Well

Being a cuck is something I can not believe as a viable lifestyle and never will understand. Whatever happen to "forsake all others" or does one have options to option to out of certain portions of wedding vows and insert other options into marriage vows post marriage?

What if she becomes pregnant? Well they determine who is the biological father of the baby? Will the hubby be the "father" or would Joy divorce and marry Scott. She has already replace hubby mentally with Scott's cock.

For Joy POV. She has her cake and can has damm 9 course meal. So why should Joy be sullen? Why would she want to change. she has best of both worlds.. the financial , emotional support of a loving confused hubby .. and a cock that makes her scream.

IMHO Just get a GLOCK (THAT WILL DO) SHOOT SCOTT DICK OFF AND ASK FOR A DIVORCE. THAT WILL THE REMEDY FOR THIS SAD SITUATION.

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by cap535610/13/14

story

sad story but I can see how that can happen really fast to a couple

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by honeylicker112410/13/14

Excellent, again

Your story came up during the morning because it wasn't there earlier. I'm glad it did. As one commenter said, it was sad. Their life could never be the same again. Hubby had to "share" his lovely wife with other men. Yes, it's not right, but that's how they handled it. I'm glad you brought out about the addictive personality. I look for your counseling input in each story.
Again 5 *'s on the erection meter.
Thank you, Cleo.

Now, when is the next one coming????? LOL

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by CharlieB410/13/14

I didn't mind it,

Interesting exploration of a couples changing lifestyle. I felt the end was a bit of a tacked on way to get it finished quickly but I guess the damage was done. I like the way you write sex scenes, well done. 4*

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by impo_5810/13/14

Agree with @cap5356...

This is a sad story about sad people!! He felt so sad for both of them, that he wanted to die. I believe that was the solution, because he caused all that happened.

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by javmor7910/13/14

Sad story.

I'm sorry but that is just too sad. I couldn't accept barely being able to satisfy my wife. I know that my wife has had more partners than just me. I am also aware of the possibility that there may be one or two who are better lovers than me IN GENERAL. However, I could not just be okay with barely being able to get the job done. If I'm not the best, you can be damn sure that I'm going to spend the rest of our lives trying to make the top 3. Over time, you can learn her body in such a way that you can satisfy her sufficiently. This guy simply lays down and accepts the fact that he is mediocre. I can't accept that in ANY aspect of my life.

As for the story itself, it was well written and engaging. I'm glad that it worked out for their relationship. I would fear that my wife would lose respect for me if I just laid down like this guy did, but if it works for them then who are we to judge.

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by deadone10/13/14

Nice to see

That he still lives in dilution. He is for the most part completely irrelevant. She only needs his money and status, not him as a person because she can get that from her lovers. Of course she screams in madness, in frustration, in boredom, in disdain but not in joy or excitement.
He is the loser of month and a huge WACC worthy of being run through the streets and stoned.

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by ramonbrook10/14/14

Scott comes over whenever he wants?

Sorry I would beat the shit out of him if he came barging into my house never mind the part when he is getting my wife! Sorry I don't like u welcomed cuckolds! It's one thing if the husband wants it , but if he doesn't, then kick her addictive ass out to the curb!

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by arch3r10/14/14

Loved it !!

keep writing lots more stories

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by zampa10/14/14

Great material for a video or movie

These three stories, plus a fourth detailing her first time anal with Scott's large penis stretching her rectum, would, if properly cast, make a wonderful video, perhaps even a full-length movie. Some of the scenes with her going completely ballistic would be wonderful scenes to see.

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Sure...

let's get Disney on it.

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by SELSTIM11/27/14

Kind of a Let Down

Great writing as usual but the way you had the story progress I thought it had a lot more potential. You kind of set your readers up for a very erotic anal scene in which Steve boasted that after experiencing it she would be all his. A young beautiful small blonde wife with big blue eyes whose husband has opened the door for her to be seduced by a big dicked demanding lover that pushes the boundaries of brutality and already has her addicted to his cock. I thought you would put her in more situations where she would have to choose between the love of her husband or her cravings for Steve's big cock. Something like Steve demands that she go off the pill because he wants her to have his babies or she can't fuck her little dicked husband if she wants his big dick or he decides to have her for himself and demands she leave her husband for him. Now that would fit the title. As is, "The Young Wife" isn't ruined. She's having the time of her life because her husband is letting her have all the big dick she wants and he's not only all right with it but he enjoys it and she's still his wife. Again, good story and well written but I felt let down. Thank you for sharing your talent.

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by Chagrined12/22/14

I prefer something totally different.

Like when the husband puts a bullet in them both. That says it all for me! :)

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by RealDoc01/01/15

Then He puts the gun in his mouth and blows what's left of his brains out.

yep ruined!! everything about the story reeks of evil.

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by EgoTrixi02/23/15

Husband should act...??

...no chance! He is empty minded enough - he could never achive anything constructive. Bad story..started off without relevant content - and has lost a lot since then.

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