Chords that Bind Ch. 01

Good story but...

This reads more like a non-consent/reluctance story. Most BDSM stories I've read on this site were consensual? Will this one be turning consensual? If so, then it should stay here. If not then it definitely belongs under noncom.

I had trouble with that...

I'm in agreement actually... but it's going to be consensual later (hope I can say that without giving anything away:) Thanks for your feedback, it's something I really appreciate.

Actually poetic you have

This is def non con even if she does submit later.
To me the story usually loses its appeal when the victim submits. I prefer the fight.
Will keep reading though as the writing is particularly good

This story is moving

I just wanted to apologize again to anyone who was made uncomfortable by my wishy-washy categorization. Until it becomes more appropriate, Chords that Bind will be continued under non/con with a BDSM tag... Hope you all forgive me.

Poeticlicense

I also got a little confused when posting my first BDSM story, not realising that was only for consensual only. Actually, once that was pointed out to me, I found the non-cons section seems to have more interesting stories, (i.e. action, adventure, intrigue). Good start so far. Keep on posting!

My Two Cents

Not bad. My only advice would be to watch your use of the word seemed, slightly, and tried. It tends to get over used, and I do it myself before back tracking, and correcting flow. If you have a sentence like... He seemed to wait a moment... it should be... he paused. Same with slightly and tried. Usually someone either does something, or they don't... Tried and slightly are unnecessary words, and more often the sentence flows better without the use of them.

Nicely done.

Chapter 1 was intriguing. For shorter chapters, they really pull you into the story quickly. You're writing has a way of being direct and taking the reader where you want them to go, but it still allows for the story and characters to develop in the time available. Nicely done.

Chapter 2 will have to wait until tomorrow. Thanks for an interesting read so far.
Apple

Love it!

Great start, I'll definitely be reading more. I usually shy away from stories in which the woman is completely non consenting, I tend to prefer reluctance more than force, but so far this has drawn me in. It's very well written, great job!