. . .but you do need a competent editor or a review of sentence structure. Don't let the negative comments get you down. You have good ideas. You just need some assistance getting them on paper properly.
I know how to write Anonymous... Who are you to judge me exactly? I write how I wish to write and if you can't handle it then so be it. However you will not belittle me for my work as you don't even have the balls to list your name. As far as my writing goes don't be a damn Nazi Hitler has been dead for years! Writing isnt all about punctuation, sentence structure and the likes. It's also about creating a pierce of art and painting a picture for the people who will be reading it. They should be able to feel, taste, touch and see as if they were right there! For those who weren't showing there ass and being a big bag of dicks. Thank you for your respectful criticism and ill consider them.
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This has potential but is in desperate need of editing.
A good premise. . .
. . .but you do need a competent editor or a review of sentence structure. Don't let the negative comments get you down. You have good ideas. You just need some assistance getting them on paper properly.
-HS
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I know how to write Anonymous... Who are you to judge me exactly? I write how I wish to write and if you can't handle it then so be it. However you will not belittle me for my work as you don't even have the balls to list your name. As far as my writing goes don't be a damn Nazi Hitler has been dead for years! Writing isnt all about punctuation, sentence structure and the likes. It's also about creating a pierce of art and painting a picture for the people who will be reading it. They should be able to feel, taste, touch and see as if they were right there! For those who weren't showing there ass and being a big bag of dicks. Thank you for your respectful criticism and ill consider them.
Hugs and Kisses,
PinupDoll26
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