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Bringing the Family Together Pt. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/19/14

Underage sex

You are being reported.

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by Anonymous10/19/14

Underage

I didn't see any? Feels like you are reporting this falsely?

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by Anonymous10/19/14

there is no under age sex here he is 18 so get your head out of your ass

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by Anonymous10/19/14

needs an editor!

not much build up. The long-reunited mom is a famous porn star? Leaves nothing to the imagination.

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by Anonymous10/19/14

uuuh lol

The backstory of how she had him was something that should have been a lot less... that. Lol

Could have been a good simple story, but there are bits that hurt it more than help it. Detail is great, but you should refocus the detail on how they meet, not how he was born.

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by Anonymous10/19/14

a very original and creative story

And the good news is that, though he's had to wait a long time, the boy finally got his hard young cock up the same cunt he came out of and blew his hot young balls right up where he was once a baby. Just like in the story, more and more mothers and sons are coming to understand that up his own mother's cunt is where a boy's great big load of creamy semen belongs.

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by Eric_Shift10/19/14

Interesting

I've never heard of Ms. Zara before, but I'm willing to read more.
If this is going to be long running I wouldn't mind if you could add Jasmine Sinclare to the list, if she isn't already included. As a sister or a friend, it matters not.
That girl I am aware of.

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