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All Comments on 'Erotic Hotel'

by BigBigPRN

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
lacking and rushed

The sex scenes were very rushed and not enough descriptive.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
MARTY IS A LUCKY M°§€Г-⸮^©K€Г

Where is the motel?

I gave the story 5*.

The writer has potential: her (his) writet's craft is very good.

If you keep writing i will be a fan.

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