Sue and Rob's Garden Party

Same Old Crap

Just another cuck story. Be up front about it and you won't get one bombed. One Star.

ust nuther wimpy puky pathetic

cuck auto-bio proud to be a wimpy cuck.

TAKING HER HOME

Take her home and do CLEAN-UP on both of those hole filled with someone elses CUM and become her CUCKOLD learning to do clean-up on her any time she wants or if filled with cum. YUM-YUM

suck

nice

Wrong category

1*

Just can't catch a break

11 new postings in LW section today. At least 3, maybe 4 of them, don't belong in this category. What don't people understand about at least having some kind of wife in the story? And not a single posting was worth the time spent reading it. I suppose it's true that all the good authors have left for other sites. The garbage flows on. This sorry story was just another example of an author that can't write a decent sentence, let alone a good story.

The charge of the Cuckold Brigade

The last 3 weeks were theirs.Pathetic and stale writers all.

We need a chuck catergory

Another sick tale

Right category - Not at all bad

Nice story. Not my favourite point of view, but well written.

I am sure you know well enough to ignore the comments made by feeble little men insecure about their own sexuality. Keep it up! :)

Only problem is you said he was jealous when others flirted or groped you so I would have expected him to never allow that to happen

Something wrong here

In the 1st paragraph Rob gets jealous when Sue is hit on, yet still likes her to wear sexy clothing. At the end he enjoys watching her getting fucked and does nothing about it. Does Sue actually know Rob?

so the pathic little hubbie gets off watching a bunch of guys fuck his soul mate.

What kind of perverts are you , gay, wimpy, or just stupid.

Nice Story

Please don't listen to anyone that says the story is shit. It isn't. You and your husband obviously love each other and I'm happy to see two people who are open and honest with one another. Please don't let that love die. Nice story

nice story, love each other, are you fucking retarded.

You ever see or been in a gang bang, they are nasty, demeaning, messy . A bunch of drunk guys talking shit about her and her gay hubbie while filming with their phones, where is the love and respect in that. Whores don't do gang bangs, what kind of brain dead slut is this, and hubbie is a stupid lit joke.-5.

when you lead with deception, don't be surprised when the readers react

" He is also very jealous and we have often had arguments when he feels some men have gone too far with the odd grope here and there."
does not bring us to your unhappy ending.

btw, John is Not their friend. he and his family are predators.

be honest with your readers and you might get fewer 1* bombs.
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a question of clarification

Why is it called Sue and Rob's Garden Party, when they attend a house warming party at John's house? It wasn't their party. it wasn't at their home. and Sue and Rob did not party together.

Nice

The subject matter is great and not written enough about.
A little more reluctance on your behalf would of made it sexier.

Stupid

Here's a tip. If you're going to write a story pretending to be a woman and want to be believed, don't use the word "cunt". Women, even slutty ones, almost never use the word "cunt".

this story is not even worth a comment

another thing

Unprepared for anal sex? No loosening her up first?
Just sticking it in when she has never had anal sex before?
She would not be enjoying it, unless she is so loose that she needed Depends.

How Old Are You?

You shouldn't lie about your age.

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I don't know what to make of this. The woman was basically gang-raped at a party, and apparently enjoyed it. And the husband, who is described as the jealous type, watches from the bushes and jerks off three times.

Did the husband set this up? Do the "friends" not care about the well-being of their friends? Are they just a bunch of horny animals who fuck whatever they can get their hands on?

The action was fine; it's the motivations of every character in this story that leave me scratching my head.

retards

Really hav u ppl not Been with sluts they call their vag anything including cunt really how dumb can u be

Keep the stories cumming!

Please continue to tell your stories from the female perspective and tell the naysayers to get a life. If they do not like these stories go read a disney childrens book since they are probably pediphiles.

Confusing

I agree with Swingerjoe - too many inconsistencies.

Lovely Story

Amazing & lovely story. Descriptions of sexual antics are flawless and to the point. Don't be wary of the negative comments.

1*

Take this trash to the garbage can.

WHAT A DRIBBLE !!!!

PURE PILE OF SHIT