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the plot is ok
Well Suman your plot is ok, such encounter (nephew/aunt) is now common in suburban areas or even in congested cities where anything goes. But, there's a big but. Your substance lacked the necessary ingredients of a good sexual encounter! there were so many shortcuts. Foreplay is essential, in like manner you should put excitement on your premise, that way you will catch attention of your bored reader and hold their breath, expecting a good, sensual, perspiring dynamic high fucking action! Never mind your grammar and spellings and subtitles. You are not an American, anyway. No offense meant
I agree
It started out well with the woman's horny nature being really exciting but lack of foreplay between seducing and actual sex was a huge turn off.
Bare waste
What a bogus story. . . You are a male posing as a woman
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