All Comments on 'Rainy Day Rubdown'

Pat, you are a very good writer adn i plan on readign everything that you have written. thank you for all the emjoyment you have given me.

janice

I like reading (and writing) stories about older women with younger women. This one was structured perfectly, up to and including the surprising licks to Gina lovely asshole by Cindy.

Great job Patricia51!

Mabel

Nice arousing tale

Why would anybody want to lick another persons shit hole???

I loved the story and I love licking ass!

This is erotica at its best. Kudos to you and your friend Marian for this exciting story. I am glad that she did not edit out the part where Cindy performed analingus on Gina. Yes, there are those of us who enjoy giving and receiving analingus.

Patricia i thought was mind blowing great.

Pat Murray

Atlanta,GA

I love your story because it gave me a hard-on.

...the use of an editor is helping give balance and erotic poise. i.e. both my partner and i think this one has a loving component that adds to the eroticism.

I loved the sensuality of the massage leading to all the rest, especially the ass-licking. Can't resist a story with an older woman, either. Thank you!

That was sooo hot, it had me squirming ;)

This is a well-told story, the first one of yours I've read (not last). I enjoyed the seduction very much, the age difference was enjoyable for me, the characters were both intelligent, which I appreciate. It was tasteful and sexy at the same time.

it was pretty good, I liked the part where she starts to protest and then gives in

This is a GREAT story!