Really hot story, especially for a first submission. Maybe a bit more realistic dialogue would be good, but that's pretty minor overall. Love the teasing, begging, and control elements. Would love to read more from you.
As to the anonymous dumbass commenter, why would you willfully read a lesbian sex story and then complain at the presence of lesbian sex? If you want to read impregnation stories, you can find them elsewhere without making a prat of yourself.
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It's a scorcher!!!
This story is hot from beginning to end. Don't you just love lust-making
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Really hot story, especially for a first submission. Maybe a bit more realistic dialogue would be good, but that's pretty minor overall. Love the teasing, begging, and control elements. Would love to read more from you.
As to the anonymous dumbass commenter, why would you willfully read a lesbian sex story and then complain at the presence of lesbian sex? If you want to read impregnation stories, you can find them elsewhere without making a prat of yourself.
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