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baikalisanbaikalisanover 9 years ago
Great beginning...

I'd love to see where this goes. Please continue! :D

lovemeorhateme18lovemeorhateme18over 9 years ago
Hey

Great start i would love to read more

ilovegibbsilovegibbsover 9 years ago
More please!!!!

Please give us more!!! Please, I have to know what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Long time reader, first comment

Excellent writing. Do more.

dnsontndnsontnover 2 years ago

Gotta say, I wasn't a fan of the way this story started, but I kept reading. Read on, folks. It gets better and better!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The beginning of this sucked - very self-destructive and not a good look for Hayden as a likable character. But once he stands up for himself, leaves, and then meets Jackson, things turn around. Hoping for much better now.

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I deleted the previous chapters of Just Ask and am working on a rewrite. I also changed my username. Be careful about how much personal information you put on the internet :D How do I make this my full-time job? Thank you for reading! Please enjoy

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