Wonder what the previous commenter expected. The storyline says this was about a man who likes mature ladies. The opening describes a older lady who still has a great sex life and is lucky enough to fuck a younger man. If this isn't what he likes, why did he read the story anyway? So he could spew his idiocy like he's some elitist stud?
He calls this terrible writing? Did he even read it? Probably just wants to be a mean prick. Probably voted 1 star too. He hides behind anonymous because if his girlfriend saw his comment, she'd tell the world he's a one-star lover and could learn something here. Get a life, douche-bag.
Ms Mustard, nice story. It rings true. Teach that young pup the good stuff you've learned and he'll be pleasing the ladies all his life (unlike Mr. Anymouse). 5 stars.
Maybe I unfairly expected a Harold and Maude msdcap sparks. The constant back and forth communication and openess was very well depicted. The author said this was based in real events and it felt that way, kudos for that. Bringing other characters in as defacto Greek chorus to express the surprise and novelty of the uncommon coupling ?
There are DEFINITE sparks in this story like the shared pot or incest confession but they aren't examined. Interesting things are kept at a surface level. Maybe I'm being too harsh. This was an easy read with clearcut strengths , rightly or wrongly I expected to be dazzled.
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Anonymous10/15/14
strapon, seriously?
Hey, Sandra. I loved reading all your stories. I am a df as well as a literotica member.
What was about the strapon bit in this story.? Do you do that , too. Wow, Please email me about it on nicebutthorny at the rate g mail dot com or send a mesage to misterindia on literotica.
You have a great vocabulary and a nice way of telling a story. This series was well edited. Some more detail on your open marriage deal with your husband would be appreciated. I say; more sex; more doobies; and less judgement from the moralizers.
English
So tired of anonymous jerks
Wonder what the previous commenter expected. The storyline says this was about a man who likes mature ladies. The opening describes a older lady who still has a great sex life and is lucky enough to fuck a younger man. If this isn't what he likes, why did he read the story anyway? So he could spew his idiocy like he's some elitist stud?
He calls this terrible writing? Did he even read it? Probably just wants to be a mean prick. Probably voted 1 star too. He hides behind anonymous because if his girlfriend saw his comment, she'd tell the world he's a one-star lover and could learn something here. Get a life, douche-bag.
Ms Mustard, nice story. It rings true. Teach that young pup the good stuff you've learned and he'll be pleasing the ladies all his life (unlike Mr. Anymouse). 5 stars.
Very matter of fact recitation of an odd coupling
Maybe I unfairly expected a Harold and Maude msdcap sparks. The constant back and forth communication and openess was very well depicted. The author said this was based in real events and it felt that way, kudos for that. Bringing other characters in as defacto Greek chorus to express the surprise and novelty of the uncommon coupling ?
There are DEFINITE sparks in this story like the shared pot or incest confession but they aren't examined. Interesting things are kept at a surface level. Maybe I'm being too harsh. This was an easy read with clearcut strengths , rightly or wrongly I expected to be dazzled.
strapon, seriously?
Hey, Sandra. I loved reading all your stories. I am a df as well as a literotica member.
What was about the strapon bit in this story.? Do you do that , too. Wow, Please email me about it on nicebutthorny at the rate g mail dot com or send a mesage to misterindia on literotica.
Well done!
You have a great vocabulary and a nice way of telling a story. This series was well edited. Some more detail on your open marriage deal with your husband would be appreciated. I say; more sex; more doobies; and less judgement from the moralizers.
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