This is quite possibly the most believable story I have seen yet. Well written with little to no grammatical errors nor spelling mistakes to jar the reader out of the story.
Well done. Well Done indeed.
Even if the sex is less than satisfying. Perhaps the next such could have the hero husband getting descriptively intimate to erase the horrro of being sexually assaulted by her father in law? Just a thought.
English
ok
Yes mabey a bit lame, but still believable so over all good and gets 5 from me..
Nicely done
This is quite possibly the most believable story I have seen yet. Well written with little to no grammatical errors nor spelling mistakes to jar the reader out of the story.
Well done. Well Done indeed.
Even if the sex is less than satisfying. Perhaps the next such could have the hero husband getting descriptively intimate to erase the horrro of being sexually assaulted by her father in law? Just a thought.
Lmao
That is all.
Good story
Well conceived. Unexpected ending.
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