All Comments on 'Nasty Night Out'

the story was one i enjoyed. the she male was what won it for me,

Please take this the right way. Your story has a lot of possibilities, but I got tired of the misspelling. There are free editors here (usually other writers - you can read their stories before committing to them) who will be glad to fix things - without changing your intentions about what you want to communicate. Work with one. I'd like to read how the lady(?) deals with three rampant cocks.

What a stunning fantasy! Excellent!