All Comments on 'The Non-Standard Man Ch. 02'

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sailandoarsailandoarover 9 years ago
yeS . .

. . yES YES . . . MORE PLEASE !

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Interesting first two chapters ...

I am anxious to see how this develops. There are numerous possibilities and paths to chose. Will it be novel and interesting? Or will it be formulaic and brain numbing? I hope you are able develop your characters and keep our attention.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
what sailandor said...in spades

MORE!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Much more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great

Over_RedOver_Redover 9 years ago

This is great! Very well written. Looking forward to see where the story goes. I'm interested in a world scarred by a man-killing plague!

MissPrimMissPrimover 9 years agoAuthor
Yes, more is on the way.

Chapter 3 is in moderation, waiting to post, and Chapters 4 and 5 are complete in my files. On to chapter 6!

"Will it be novel and interesting? Or will it be formulaic and brain numbing?"

Only you can be the judge of that, but please let me know either way!

Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Amazing

Can't wait for the next installment!! Very expertly written!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Very Nice...

But feel's like an extension of Final Stand's 1 in 10. Maybe you should make a reference.

MissPrimMissPrimover 9 years agoAuthor
I hate to admit

I don't understand Anon's reference:

"But feel's like an extension of Final Stand's 1 in 10. Maybe you should make a reference."

My work is not derivative, but the product of my own, admittedly, quirky brain.

BTW--Chapter 3 is posted, and Chapter 4 is in the queue for moderation.

Thanks for reading!

observer7observer7over 9 years ago
Bah, ignore the boy

He gives away being young enough to think Final Stand either invented or inspired all stories about a plague taking out more of one gender and leaving an excess of the other gender on Literotica now.

You know, nothing like The White Plague (Frank Herbet 1982) or "When It Changed" (Joanna Russ, 1972). Just as examples.

BearCellaBearCellaover 9 years ago

I want an Andrew....

Cooks.

Cleans.

Organizes.

Asks about MY DAY!!!!

Even does up hair....

Yes. Yes. I need an Andrew.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Har har

Just as good as the stories about a man with the "perfect" android wife. Not a big fan of the archetype personally but you did the view from a woman's side which is always refreshing. Plus who doesn't imagine having the perfect robot partner every once in a while?...

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
brilliant writing!!!

This is well done- i wanr to read more, and I will!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Do you have another s I do fantasy in you?

This one is pretty darn good!

MissPrimMissPrimabout 5 years agoAuthor
Do I have another fantasy book?

Many others but I've ghostwritten them for other people. However, I have an M/M Science fiction story coming out from Nine Star Press in early spring 2019. It's called Ostakis.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Really cool!

The unconventional power dynamic of what is typically a one sided situation is super thrilling. Way to change up the genre! And it's HAWT and well written. BRAVA!

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