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WELCOME BACK !!!!!!
OMG !!!! I was so happy when I saw your "name" and a new story , glad that your back ( and hopefully all is well ) you are such a great writer I love the way you take your time to build the characters and your story instead of just rushing through them just to get to the sex...
I would love to have a fiesty friend like Dean he may be short but I got a feeling if push came to shove he would absolutely try to take nick down , regardless of Nick being so much bigger than him...
I have to wonder about Nick they say he's homophobic , is that maybe his way of dealing with possibly being in the "closet" , afraid to come out for fear of the repercussions that he would have to deal with if people found out he is gay ??
Guess I will just HAVE to wait for more , unfortunately I'm not a very patient person.
Again so happy you are back , can't wait for more I'm hooked already....
Well well!!
Welcome back. Hope all is well. Thanks for writing and submitting. I throughly enjoyed this and am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!!
Thanks
Hey guys, thanks for the nice comments. Yep all is good with me and I got to say, coming back to writing after so long feels really good. Glad you guys like the story so far and the best is yet to come. Haha.
Hey, Welcome back! although I've not read your stories before....
I really enjoyed this and have to say 'homophobe, maybe - but from what quarter?' ;)
Really looking forward to the next instalment, but will look at your other stories in the meantime :)
NICE
Nicely done, I enjoyed it. I agree with one of the other commenter's I think Nick is at least Bi and maybe Gay. At least I hope that is the case. It would be really be cool if all three Drew, Nick and Dean were to get together at some point. Waiting for the next chapter, please do not make us wait to long.
that guy...
is the reason tazers were invented. Carry one and electrify his testicles the next time he tries to bully you. Aggression and abuse always escalate...ALWAYS!
Terrific!
This is a great story. You have me hooked from the first paragraph! I hope you will submit the next chapter very soon. I really want to know what happens next!!!!
Thanks for the nice feedback guys. The whole story is already submitted and awaiting approval. The schedule right now is up to literotica as they approve the works. As for the next chapter, it will be up tomorrow. Thanks again
Nick a nice guy?
Make Nick ultimately a nice guy, and give the handsome quarterback some chest hair and hairy abs. A real turn on!!
nick
i get the feeling that they might become i couple.? hope i am correct , o yes a hairy chest and a big heart a must .?
Getting together.....
Like some previous comments, I hope they .....become good friends!
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