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Steamy First Time

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by Anonymous

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by redlion7510/18/14

she was lying to herself and jordie.

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by Anonymous10/18/14

To be continued.

Lindsay and Sarah!

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by Anonymous10/22/14

terrible

A waste of the reader's time!

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by Shadowsucks01/20/15

Crap! Crap! Crap!

Nothin'! No plot, meaning, uniqueness---nothing. Utter waste of time; yours for writing it, mine for reading it. One star is more generous than you deserve, my friend.

Erin

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