she was lying to herself and jordie.
Lindsay and Sarah!
A waste of the reader's time!
Nothin'! No plot, meaning, uniqueness---nothing. Utter waste of time; yours for writing it, mine for reading it. One star is more generous than you deserve, my friend. Erin
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she was lying to herself and jordie.
To be continued.
Lindsay and Sarah!
terrible
A waste of the reader's time!
Crap! Crap! Crap!
Nothin'! No plot, meaning, uniqueness---nothing. Utter waste of time; yours for writing it, mine for reading it. One star is more generous than you deserve, my friend.
Erin
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