All Comments on 'Last Day at the Beach'

Yes, 22 years difference is a lot when he's getting older. He seems realistic enough to recognize the problem at hand but I (who am I to express an opinion?) don't like the wy she forces this situation on him. She could/should have discussed it beforehand. Giving that guy a blowjob is not just one thing but what would have happended if the husband hadn't been there? Why remove her rings before going to the pool? Not very promising for the future although he seems to accept it at fair value.

Suspending judgement on the consequences, really well written and a great turn on to read. Maybe a sequel? In which the guy watches his wife receive someone else's cock, and semen in her pussy. It is clearly going to happen.

As for the future, the writer has nicely lined up the guy's acceptance that his wife is likely to get some of her satisfaction outside their marriage. As long as it's just sex, and she shares with him, letting him watch, or telling him about it later, and he can handle it, then why not?

Five stars!

If we are to judge this story by the morality of the characters instead of its quality and content (as many readers in this category do), then it's clear the wife's actions were indefensible and unforgivable, and we should rate this with one star.

But if we're to judge this story based on how well-written it is, and how erotic and arousing the story is, then this is easily a five star story.

I awarded you with five stars.

I just liked it, but don't like it...Why liked it? Because all ended well, maybe...Why didn't like it? 1st - When a couple with that difference of ages marry, they must be certain to be able to stay true to their vows...2nd - They already had children...3rd - What she did was cheating, he accepted it but was cheating, and from now on he had to accept all her lovers...Even behind him...That makes me think this marriage will not survive...

The reality of life. In her mid 40's my very experienced, attractive and stacked wife went off for a Masters degree in a city far to the north while I held a job of great responsibility in our home town. We had already tried to find a lover for her once without luck. I don't know what happened while she was away and really don't care

We got together about every six weeks except when she was doing an internship out of state. To this day we have a deal that if she wants a hard one it's OK with me. Not everyones cup of tea but has worked for us.

This story could have been ours so I gave it a 5. I think Lincoln outlawed slavery and the ownership of people. I don't own her nor she me. We just need to be honest with each other.

... and very believable.

I agree that they've got a better chance than most, simply because they're dealing with this head-on. It could lead to some very good things.

You say we should judge a story based on:

how well-written,

how erotic

and arousing the story is.

for some of us, her actions are not erotic, or arousing, no matter how well-written the story may be.

Not everyone is turned on by sharing the person they love with someone else. It is not always a moral judgment. It can be as simple as, some of us prefer strawberry, some prefer chocolate, others like neopolitan. What is the old saying?

Different strokes, for different folks. (we are, after all, talking about stroke stories, not ice cream.)

While this story structurally is very well written, what may be 5*****'s for you, might be 1* for me.

22 years seems like a lot. But it was an excellent story. It's nice to see good writing. Looking forward to the next.

MichaelG

Truer words were never written. Erotica is in the eye of the beholder, no matter how well a story is written. I consider all swinging/willing cuckold tales non-erotic so I skimmed through this one and decided to pass. No thanks. Doesn't do anything for me. There is nothing erotic about guys getting off sharing their wives. Doesn't surprise me that "swingerjoe" praised this story. Right up his alley. Now watch him bash anything that isn't a swinging/willing cuckold tale.

I touched a nerve with many of you. This story was in no way meant to glamorize or endorse the inherent infidelity in the female character's actions. This obviously strikes close to home with many of the faithful readers of this sub, and my only intention was that the speaker's emotional struggle added a layer of complexity to the story. In retrospect I see that this would have been more appropriate in another sub.

Honestly: just trying to describe some hot action. :)

Liked it but don't agree with that life style. She strait up cheated and was sneaky about it. Hubby was mad and the story should have gone in that direction when they were done , instead he sounds like he will just comply with her turning into a pig. To the guy who's wife went to college far from home, why? No schools closer to home

Fiftysomething, you & your husband get each other. I liked it, but not as much aswhere its more mutual.

The author doesn't have anything to apologize for. He wrote a very well written story about a loving couple, no humiliation, believable and very hot. Exactly what the LW category should be. By definition, the entire website is immoral so if someone objects they shouldn't be reading

a lot of readers thought that si exactly what you were doing.

SECOND... You state that your "only intention was that the speaker's emotional struggle added a layer of complexity to the story"

again total failure. In fact the husband didnt react at all.

Great story. Pls ignore the trolls & keep going with more chapters. This has great possibilities. There is emotion & honesty here. Wifey did drop several hints to him beforehand what she might be up to - taking off the wedding ring. Also the raised eyebrow & smile when he came in the bedroom. Communication can be more than just spoken. They do need now to talk as the age gap will become an issue if not handled together lovingly. 5* Ken

is he a wimp who cant stand up for himself or a fetishist who enjoys sharing the woman he supposedly loves? its clear that she doesn't love him or she wouldn't have done what she did.

For any man to score a woman twenty two years his junior is an incredible accomplishment as he doesn't seem to be a Rupert Murdoch, Paul McCartney or Tony Blair. And what do the three have in common? They all had horns firmly placed on their very rich heads by wives that were much younger than them. Our hero in this story is a realist and though not mentioning anything to his wife he takes the age difference into consideration while he plans their future. With those that have left negative comments criticizing either our hero or our heroine I am confident when I say that not one has been faced with such a choice so how can they judge on what is after all a purely hypothetical situation. The manner that our hero has sought to make compromises in his marriage is mature, logical and realistic and I doubt that their marriage will suffer when the time has come and our hero can't get an erection as hard as steal. To the author thank you for your time and your imagination and writing such a challenging story. Stars? 5 I never sign Anon but it wouldn't accept my credentials. I go under the name drooge

@ robertl Yes we BTB fans are immoral too, because we enjoy when a cheating wife goes to prison for more years to be inocent.....................

This is much better written than most but I just can't accept the values implicit in such a relationship.

We're on the same page, brother. We all have different kinks, and what is hot and erotic to me might turn you off completely, and vice versa.

That is why I avoid the Gay Male, Fetish, Incest and other sections of this site. And that is why I primarily read Loving Wives stories: because I enjoy tales of extra-marital fun, swinging and sharing.

If you don't find those types of stories erotic, then WHY THE FUCK are you reading stories in this section?? I honestly don't understand why people are so disgusted by stories about swinging and sharing in a section of the site described as "swinging and sharing." Do you read stories in the Gay Male section, and then bash the authors and one-star them to death for writing stories about gay men?

Using your logic why the fuck do you read every BTB story and then whine like a little girl that its in the wrong category- Joe your wrong Take a look at the bottom of the Loving Wives page Hall of Fame I looked at the top 50 HOF stories and there maybe 2 that involve swinging and sharing Joe the readership of Lit has spoken and the moderators have obviously listened or these stories would be put in another place'Its NOT just swinging or extra marital fun as you so often say Its more-Look at the highest rated stories-Once again the readership has spoken

Devastating content. I think many of us read LW from a place of hurt or projection of our most devastating fears. Some of us have been hurt and relish in stories where somehow the scales are balanced. Often the stories hurt but we can't stop reading.

I am broken that way and even after 20 years have trouble moving on. The stories where there is a real effort to restore relationships touch me deeply. The story where the husband (partner) gets some sort of pleasure out of the wife doing other men/women and encourages her exploits or simply doesn't care disgust me. They are not my cup of tea. The stories where sex seems to trump the betrayal and where the partner sees it as "only sex" cut me to the bone. As you might have observed in my other comments Betrayal is my big thing. This story had no betrayal of the husband but certainly of the nature of relationship and marriage. Why do swingers marry at all or continue to be married? Why don't partners just acknowledge their need for autonomy and separate? I have no problem with some shared partner experiences (maybe I have a little problem with them) but cavalier sex troubles me a lot.

Recently I've been thinking about the biochemical aspects of "open" relationships and of betrayed relationships. I don't think we know enough about oxytocin and it's effect on bonding. Perhaps when sex partners are varied and numerous the effects of the "love hormone" are so minimized that and diluted that bonding and connection are diminished if not destroyed over time and experiences to the point that relationships are no longer relationships.

Forgive me for rambling on and imposing on your time and screen real estate. I would like to know what others think.

it should be thoroughly discussed, rules put into place and agreed upon, then planned and executed with the knowledge of both parties. This was not. Without any discussion or concern for her husband's feelings or the marriage, she simply and flagrantly cheats.

I don't care if I was into it. That would have been totally unacceptable

It is fiction and well written. I gave it 4*s, but if she had been my wife she would have had to get home on her own.

I'm forced to read BTB stories because so many of those boring, non-erotic stories are incorrectly placed in this category for some reason. They have nothing to do with the description of this category, but are misplaced here for no other reason than a wife is involved in the storyline, and the word "Wives" appears in this category's title.

Why the fuck would you write a non-erotic story about divorce and revenge and place it in a category described as "extra-marital fun, swinging and sharing?" Seriously. The only reason for doing so is that this is the most popular category on the site, and draws far more readers than the Non-Erotic category. It's deliberate dishonesty, and the admins allow authors to get away with it time and again.

As for the Hall of Fame, and the ratings of LW stories in general, that is completely MEANINGLESS. Any story that ends in divorce, death or genital mutilation automatically gets a five star rating from the knuckle-dragging BTB crowd. And any story that doesn't involve those things gets one-starred to death by that same crowd. The actual quality of the story has NOTHING to do with the rating.

...UNLESS they were both too timid and fearful to admit such a desire to their spouse. Then they might never find out that it's something they would both welcome. It would take some extraordinary mistake like the one in this story to expose the darker desires.

I know I would never suggest to my wife that I'd like another woman in our bed! The consequences of getting that wrong are too severe, so I'll never know if that's something she would be into.

I actually wasn't going to comment on your story. I skimmed it mostly, and while I thought it DID represent a loving wife, and a marriage not likely to be destroyed as a result of this impromptu threesome, since she sprung (forced?) it on him without warning, and since you end it without any revelation to the long term consequences, I actually didn't think too much of your effort. However, I can find a positive thing to say. I think you DID a pretty good job building tension, and relating his emotions. I like that this fantasy (even for her) seemed to require his participation. She wasn't trying to exclude hubby, and didn't let the "stunt cock" fuck her. The pessimist in me thinks that this gateway experience will lead to other situations where hubby IS excluded, and where vaginal sex IS performed with the outsider, but at least for now, this wife hasn't lost her respect for hubby......yet.

That said, I felt I needed to address something relating to the comments for your story, and specifically those made by Swingerjoe. He has tried to be a "mostly" reasonable voice, putting out his POV against staunch BTB commenters. Fine, EVERY argument has two sides. However, his seems based on what I really see as a grave misconception.

He and others will point out the description for the LW category. Now I will be the first one to say that I don't think the creators of the site helped anybody when they chose deliberately vague descriptions. But with some common sense, one might realize the truer intentions.

Loving WIVES- MARRIED EXTRA-MARITAL FUN: swinging, sharing and more.

Group Sex- Orgies, SWINGERS, and others

for further consideration....

Erotic Couplings- Wild one-on-one consensual sex

Non-Erotic- Fiction without a sexual focus

Fetish- feet, panties food and OTHER KINKY THINGS

Exhibitionist and Voyeur- Watching and being watched

OK, Swingerjoe (and others who agree with him), JUST why is it that the word "Swinging" appears in two different category definitions? I highlighted words for emphasis that Literotica does not, but think about it objectively. The Loving wives category, (this title, which even in and of itself is a poor attempt at humor, doesn't really help to describe what is supposed to be intended....) is if nothing else, supposed to relate the experiences of someone who is MARRIED. I suppose you MIGHT want to be married to be a swinger, but you don't have to be. Swinging is ONE way to have extramarital sex, but by no means the ONLY way. More often than not, extra-marital sex is more simply cheating or adultery. One would assume that it was "fun" for the cheater, but not necessarily fun for the other spouse. Again, since the word "loving" is kind of a joke in the category name, why is it a stretch to view the usage of the word "fun" with the same kind of sarcasm? Meanwhile, stories that are built upon the concepts of swinging, DO belong in the Group sex category. Hey, that IS what multi-partners means. It doesn't have to be a 20 member gang-bang orgy to qualify as group sex. But swinging, and orgies, and gang bangs DO fit that category better.

So here is the point. An author will write a story, then determine where to post it. YES, this story might cover several different categories. If so, they have to figure out where the LARGEST focus of the theme resides. If the story has married people (but them being married is merely an adjective description like "she had brown hair, was married, and lived in Ohio" and ALL of the rising action is about her going to the swingers club and having sex with 4 men (none her husband), would you really say that this is a story about a marriage, or was it a story about group sex? Please, Swingerjoe, be fair. Same thing, different scene. If a woman narrates the story, and confides that she has been married for 10 years, but suddenly finds herself the object of the office manager's attention, and the entire story is a build up to the sex she has with him in the supply closet......Is that really a loving wife story, or should It have been Erotic Couplings? People have been miscategorizing stories into LW since this site's inception, but just because a lot of people don't seem to care, doesn't make it right for the people who do.

Then take THIS story here by FiftySomething. It IS in fact a LW. Why? Even if the author doesn't reveal the consequences for her actions, the build up (and may be more since hubby narrates), does in fact center around the marriage, and the sex and emotions between HUSBAND and WIFE. IF the husband and wife and the MARRIAGE really is the central theme to the story, then you DO have loving wife category. Why? LW is the only category to specifically mention MARRIAGE in its description. Do you understand it now? What if they are married people that engage in BDSM? Well if the story is more about BDSM, than it is about being married, then I say it isn't LW. What about married voyeurs? Again, where is the focus of the story? If the story centers around the feelings and emotions of a husband who realizes he is a voyeur, but still shows what the effects and influences of that are on the marriage, then you have LW. If it is just that a guy happens to be married, but is a voyeur and looks at his wife and others and all the buildup and tension related in the plot is about his masturbatory fantasies, then you DON'T have a LW, instead you have Voyeur/cuck.

Here is the thing. Most readers can agree that MANY authors write what is called "stroke stories". The purpose is to titillate. Even in LW. There have been MANY authors who feature well written sex scenes that transpire between wife and husband. But if these so-called stroke stories feature something specific, and it doesn't relate to marriage, then there IS another category for it. Swingerjoe will often criticize author's who write about break-ups and divorce. How is divorce, or revenge erotic? My answer: It isn't. But that isn't the point. Those stories, and even the more extreme BTB ones, DO in fact center around a story of marriage, and one that was destroyed BECAUSE of extra-marital sex. Swingerjoe, would say "put that in Non-erotic", but see, that category is for fiction WITHOUT a sexual focus. Adultery has EVRYTHING to do with sex! These are marriages destroyed by sex; there is OBVIOUSLY a sexual theme and focus!

Now, here is just my personal opinion for your consideration. Other's may not agree, but I don't (and I 'm sure I'm not alone) read these or any stories on this site for use as a masturbatory aid. I don't click on to Literotica, whip out my dick, and start to jack off. IF I want to do that in front of my computer, I'll click over to a REAL porn site. Watch a video or two. Here is the thing. Porn ISN'T very cerebral. It doesn't make you think. IF I want to read something for entertainment value, THEN I come here. And I know I'm not alone in thinking that way, because MANY authors DON'T just write "stroke stories". The do find ways to tell a more multi-layered tale, that features complicated emotions, diverse characters, clever plot twists, and satisfying conclusions. My purpose isn't to tell anybody what kind of story to like, or what to read, or WHY they should read it in the first place.

So, Swingerjoe, why do you?

But while I MAY HAVE written in to remind an author that they have miscategorized their story, I have never launched into attacks against any other commenter or author. This long missive is more about getting you to think about what it is you are saying, and not at all about your right to your own opinion.

My last point was going to be about cuckolding stories that feature so prominently in the LW category. Many people have tried to classify cuckolding into sub-categories. Some supposedly less extreme, in a range to the most extreme submission and feminization. I think that ANY of these cuck stories belong in fetish. Cuckolding IS a fetish. Dom/sub relations are outside the "normal" bounds of marriage. That said, SOME cuck stories DO center more around the marriage FIRST and FOREMOST, and so I would agree by my own interpretation of the definition of LW, they do belong there. That said, MOST do not, and should find a home and audience within the fetish category. THAT said, this is one argument that NO lone commenter will ever win. Accepting parts of this controversy over the years I have been reading stories on this site, has helped me learn how to avoid those stories that I would rather NOT read, and enjoy more fully the ones that post that I do. You will never find THIS anon not having something thoughtful to say in a comment. And if I can't say something nice for the author or other commenters benefit, then I will say nothing at all. But since I do respect Swingerjoe as an intelligent commenter, and contributing author here, I just had to put this into words to give him, and those who think LIKE him, something MORE to think about.

Thanks FiftySomething for sharing this forum. I appreciate your contributions, AND the opportunity to speak my mind. (for what ever it was worth)

Very well said man. I agree with you completely and you did a very good job putting that into words and making it understandable. Well done!

@ Anon you told well the cheating is sexual centered thing so the exact space of such stories with cheating wives is LW hub. The Revenge is the fun for the betrayed spouse (husband or wife) in the extramarital sex of the cheating spouse.

Thanks for your thoughtful comments. You made several good points, and we are mostly in agreement. For example, I agree that an author should place his/her story in the category that best describes its central focus.

You (and many others) believe that if a story's central focus is marriage, regardless of the state of that marriage or the relationship between husband and wife, then it belongs in LW. If that is true, then why is it that EVERY story involving a loving husband and wife who willingly allow one or both partners to have extra-marital sex is one-bombed to death, and littered with nasty comments insulting the author and the story's fictitious characters?

Why would you -- or anyone -- come to a category described as "extra-marital fun, swinging and sharing" and be offended and disgusted by stories that involve extra-marital fun, swinging and sharing? I understand that you believe stories of divorce and murder belong in this category. What I don't understand is why you believe stories like this one don't belong here, given the description you just gave me.

(And by the way, I know nothing about you or your views, given your anonymous status. I'm making a general statement about the BTB crowd.)

Nowhere in the description of this category do the words "divorce", "revenge", "murder" or "mutulation" appear, and yet this category is constantly littered with such stories.

You argue that because the wife in those stories usually had "fun" outside of her marriage, then that qualifies the story for this category. However, most of those BTB stories barely mention the affair, and the main focus is on the aftermath: the divorce proceedings, child custody, and/or some ridiculous revenge plot involving secret surveillance, private detectives, hired thugs, genital removal, etc..

Also, not every one of those stories even involves extra-marital sex! There was a story posted earlier this week where a wife merely flirted with a co-worker. She never even kissed him. And yet, somehow, that story ended up in this category. Another recent story involved a wife who invited an old boyfriend to stay over their house, without checking with her husband first. The boyfriend didn't even show up before the divorce papers were filed. Neither story had anything to do with sex, whatsoever.

(I should also note that both of those stories I mentioned received a four-star rating.)

We all seem to agree that there is nothing erotic about those stories. So what is the argument against placing those stories in the Non-Erotic category? And what is the justification for distorting the ratings for every story in the LW category simply because you don't like the morality of the characters?

I have recently read comments from people who openly admit to awarding five stars for any story that involves revenge, and one star for any story that involves willing and consensual extra-marital sex. Does that not defeat the purpose of the ratings system?

Again, I would never visit the Gay Male section of this site and one-star every story and hurl childish insults at the authors. So why do so many people visit a section of the site to read stories they know they won't like, and then bash the authors for it? It makes zero sense.

To the author: please feel free to delete as many comments as you'd like, including mine. I apologize for hijacking your comments section.

@ Swingerjoe the 1* and 5***** votes are protest votes because the sexual minority readers/authors and the sexual majority readers/authors closed into one hub. The LW is the collection the sexual majority stories where the husbands do not like their wives have extramarital sex (The reconciliation stories are sexual majority husband stories too) and sexual minority stories where the husbands like the extramarital sex of their wives. The fans of these two sub group stories are two readers and authors groups. The sexual majority is majority so I think the most clever or smartest thing is for thinking readers and authors from both groups (sexual minority and sexual majority) to mention in their comments from time to time the LW should divide into two parts.

I write this because I read from you (Swingerjoe) in a your earlier comment the LW should divide into a Marriage Strife and a Cuckolding hubs. I think against the present opinion of the owners of the Literotica this seccession idea should keep on warm time to time, because the people could change their mind.

If the LW would be only the hub for the sexual minority I think after a short time the sexual majority authors will write their stories into the Romance hub instead of Non Erotic and the Romance hub will be occupaid succesful divorced ex-husbands characters from extramarital sex ex wives after a good revenge stories, who finds a good newer better woman. I think the Literotica's owner neither like that the Romance hub becomes the center of the REVENGE-RECONCILIATION stories.

You argue that because the wife in those stories usually had "fun" outside of her marriage, then that qualifies the story for this category. However, most of those BTB stories barely mention the affair, and the main focus is on the aftermath: the divorce proceedings, child custody, and/or some ridiculous revenge plot involving secret surveillance, private detectives, hired thugs, genital removal, etc..

Everything you just described is an aspect of being married and that was his point in the first place. Dealing with an affair means focusing on the aspects of the marriage. It's not just mentioning marriage in the first sentence and moving on where the whole story really has nothing to do with marriage at all. Everything you just mentioned is dealing primarily in the marriage (court proceedings, child custody, etc..) and that is why it fits the loving wives category. I agree that cuckoldry deals with marriage and can be posted in the category per it's definition. The thing that bothers people is the fact that cuckoldry is a FETISH. How many cucks do you know who are happy to let all their friends and family know their kink? Not may because it is a fetish. That is what makes it a fetish. We do have a fetish category so it makes more sense to me to post it there where people are more inclined to enjoy something like that.

Based on the anon's definition, everything that involves sex is a fetish. I don't tell my friends and family that my wife likes to use a vibrator on her clit while I fuck her hard from behind. Does that make it a fetish?

Calling swinging and sharing a "fetish" is absurd. Maybe divorce and revenge are fetishes for some. That would explain why so many people visit an erotic website to read stories on those topics.

The description for the Fetish category mentions nothing about swinging, sharing, hotwifing or wife swapping. It would be foolish to put such stories in that category. The only time it would make sense would be if the story were about a husband and wife where one or both partners has a true fetish for feet, cum, piss, shit, etc.. If that were the main focus of the story, then it wouldn't matter if the main characters were married or not. I've stated many times that stories about hubbies happily slurping up their wives' creampies belong in Fetish.

You stated in one of your earlier rants you are forced to read BTB stories.Since when? Its really simple Joe look at the tags and if you read a few paragraphs and see where its going then stop No forcing at all.Just idiocy on your part for reading something you know your not going to like and then reading it and complaining about it You are no different than the people who read sharing, swinging or cuck stories and then complain.Don't like it don't read it and then bitch . Sorry fifty .Nice read BTW

@Swingerjoe I think you wrong. I became a Revenge story fan to read about stories, where the betrayed husbands do not become sad losers and could revive their life to became better (after divorce) and a good revenge helps them to reach this with finding better newer woman..........against the cheater wives assisting court system!

After more than 1000-2000 years we can read stories where the betrayed husbands are the successful characters were a revealation for me. After the homo marriage is a newer change in the World the successful betrayed ex husband characters in stories! If the successful betrayed husband characters in stories are fetish I am curiouse why do you think it to be FETISH? An explanation Please?????

Why do I read a story in LW category if it is one I know I will not like?

Because reading a story in ANY category is like Forest Gump opening a box of chocolates. The administrators of Literotica have chosen to make the LW subject so broad that it can include almost anything. And, because Tags are not included at the beginning of a story, you usually have no idea where the author is going to take you. Some authors take the time to make a statement at the beginning giving a bit of a hint of what is to follow. Often issuing a warning or caveat regarding the subject matter of their story, some going so far as to say if . . . . . is not to your liking please do not read. But, because not all authors extend that courtesy, we curious readers go into it blindly. Sometimes we are rewarded by finding a gem we like, sometimes not. No one forces us to read, but to find out whether we like it or not, requires reading. This story is a case in point. No history with the author. No statement at the beginning. And a rather substantial surprise at the end when the husband walks in on his wife with another man. At this point, for the reader, it becomes a matter of personal taste. Are you titillated, or outraged? Aroused, or disgusted? Only the reader can react. Only the reader can vote, comment, or not.

I too have certain categories I do not often visit because the subject matter is not arousing or erotic to me. However there are a couple I visit out of curiosity and am often happily rewarded. Without the willingness to suspend my own guidelines once in a while I would not find the occasional pleasant outcome. Let's just say that I am a sucker for a good romance.

I will let the debate rage on as to whether LW should be subdivided into additional categories, or Literotica should define each genre with stricter guidelines. It is, after all, something on which all our verbal machinations will have no influence, unless the administrators actually take the time to read our comments and/or care.

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directed, not dierected,

....but he has to be OK with it, because he's older and she's gonna need hot sex after he's slowed down. So why not start sooner, rather than later?.....like right now?

While I may not like or agree with elements of a story, the author has every right to tell it....in similar fashion readers have every right to comment and/or rate it (where authors aren't too thin skinned to take crap from some members of the audience close voting and/or limit commenting). I think that crowd are a little too emotionally invested in their stories to learn or improve. In the bigger publishing world they call them critics. And they can be at least as cruel and scathing as any I've read here.

So, do what you're gonna do....all of you and enjoy the consequences....because that's how this all works.

Now, the story is pretty well told. It follows a pattern that I find is getting rather old and overused, but had its interesting passages.

In our hero's shoes, I would certainly not think as he did, nor would I be getting mentally ready for my wife to fuck around. I would be asking her to tell me when I'm no longer enough for her and would then simply get out. Y'see, it's not in me to stay married if either partner cannot honor their marriage covenants. Again, not a fit attitude for a polyamory or cuckold story.

But that's just me, projecting myself into someone else's fantasy scenario....which I think happens too often and which I also think is often carried too far here.

Very well written. Thanks.

I like the way you write. Any chance the characters can explore this "new thing?" I'll be looking forward to it!

In the beginning of the story the author surmises that his wife would be interested in a threesome. They play these games where she pretends she's being devious by taking off her rings when she goes out. You think she thinks her husband doesn't notice? She blushes when he assures her he'll be busy watching the game while she goes out for some 'sun'. And he knows what she's doing. Touching, flirting, canoodling with the young beef gets her juices flowing, and he likes it.

I think she made an educated assessment of their situation and correctly guessed her husband's reaction. I think she planned to be caught blowing the stranger and planned to short circuit her husband's anger with the view of her sopping pussy. She has his emotions to deal with, sure, but now she is setting up a way for her to get some strange without her husband feeling a failure.

Hubby doesn't have to wonder. He doesn't have to worry about if, when, or how she's gonna cheat because he's gonna be right there with her. It's gonna be about them, not her and some random.

Another unique relationship not so unique anymore.

wife introduction to hubby new role left over clean up. her first then toy boy.

A real POS, proven by Polyliver and his seal of approval.