I loved the dirty talk and the paddling scene, but I felt like the whole story could have been fleshed out a little more. We hardly learn anything about the secretary, for example. And the detail about her (supposed?) virginity just seems kind of thrown in there.
That said, I enjoyed it. Keep writing!
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Anonymous10/18/14
total pile of shit
He could fire her for what,, doing the same fucking thing he was doing
Typical fucking office dork,, now he wants to call her everything but white
More typical fucking useless office shit that THINKS its better than anything else
No fucking wonder his old lady wont give it up for the useless fucking loser
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Lots of potential
I loved the dirty talk and the paddling scene, but I felt like the whole story could have been fleshed out a little more. We hardly learn anything about the secretary, for example. And the detail about her (supposed?) virginity just seems kind of thrown in there.
That said, I enjoyed it. Keep writing!
total pile of shit
He could fire her for what,, doing the same fucking thing he was doing
Typical fucking office dork,, now he wants to call her everything but white
More typical fucking useless office shit that THINKS its better than anything else
No fucking wonder his old lady wont give it up for the useless fucking loser
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