Cecilia doesn't appear to be very submissive right now. Is that because she is scared and a little in shock from her abduction? You did characterize her as an "unaware", as in submissive, but unaware of her submissive nature. Will she become more submissive as she becomes more comfortable and over the affects of he abduction? Is she also a virgin?
I don't even care if it turns consensual later on - this story doesn't belong to BDSM. A story where the protagonist is kidnapped is non-consensual. There is a category for that on Lit. You should put it there.
I was torn on where to categorize this... mostly because I didn't want to break the story up, but I'll be moving the next few chapters over to non/con for a bit... since Cecilia will be with Lace for a time, I'll respectfully withdraw from here until... well, you'll have to see... Until then, thanks for all the feedback on this! And, by all means, if you're enjoying this so far, meet Cecilia, Gerry and eventually Ashton over there. Appreciate the honesty! (and apologies for taking too much license with the genre)
-PoeticLicense
I was a bit of a jerk in my comment yesterday, wasn't I? Let me add that apart from being in the wrong category, it's a good story - I'll probably be watching for it and reading it in non-con.
However, non-con, kidnapping - all of that is fairly disturbing in real life.
I'd much prefer to stumble upon your story with warning, when I'm in the mood for that kind of reading. The tags helped - but I rarely look at them. Non-con - the category - is far more straightforward.
That's her succumbed already. I was hoping for more of a fight, pushing him to his limits too.
Ah well, still well written and I'm glad you're changing categories too
I agree though that the story is in the wrong cat and should be in non con, however I will be following it there for sure.
Very well written and has left me wondering and eager to see what happens next.
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Will she be changing
Cecilia doesn't appear to be very submissive right now. Is that because she is scared and a little in shock from her abduction? You did characterize her as an "unaware", as in submissive, but unaware of her submissive nature. Will she become more submissive as she becomes more comfortable and over the affects of he abduction? Is she also a virgin?
Not BDSM
I don't even care if it turns consensual later on - this story doesn't belong to BDSM. A story where the protagonist is kidnapped is non-consensual. There is a category for that on Lit. You should put it there.
Making a move...
I was torn on where to categorize this... mostly because I didn't want to break the story up, but I'll be moving the next few chapters over to non/con for a bit... since Cecilia will be with Lace for a time, I'll respectfully withdraw from here until... well, you'll have to see... Until then, thanks for all the feedback on this! And, by all means, if you're enjoying this so far, meet Cecilia, Gerry and eventually Ashton over there. Appreciate the honesty! (and apologies for taking too much license with the genre)
-PoeticLicense
Ahem
I was a bit of a jerk in my comment yesterday, wasn't I? Let me add that apart from being in the wrong category, it's a good story - I'll probably be watching for it and reading it in non-con.
However, non-con, kidnapping - all of that is fairly disturbing in real life.
I'd much prefer to stumble upon your story with warning, when I'm in the mood for that kind of reading. The tags helped - but I rarely look at them. Non-con - the category - is far more straightforward.
Oh bugga
That's her succumbed already. I was hoping for more of a fight, pushing him to his limits too.
Ah well, still well written and I'm glad you're changing categories too
A little more fight would be nice!
I agree though that the story is in the wrong cat and should be in non con, however I will be following it there for sure.
Very well written and has left me wondering and eager to see what happens next.
Hot
Whatever the category it was hot and intense.
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