Upon a Savage Shore Ch. 23

Yay

A superb story. Well done!

Wow... I hope you publish this. It's that good.

Seriously this is good. Only one jarring continuity error for me in the entire 23 chapters (added comment to that chapter). One of the best reads I've had on this site in a long time. Thank you.

This is one of the few stories that I hope to see removed from the site.

Removed so it can be published.

Thank you for sharing!

Ripperfish,
I'm so glad a friend of mine informed me about your writing and this lovely story. I enjoyed the flow of your story, the details you put into the story line, your creative skills in making the "worlds" and the "characters" so real and likable, and most of all your story telling abilities.

It was a joy to read from the beginning all the way through to the last word. "Upon a Savage Shore" was my first Sci-Fi story and I enjoyed it immensely. Thanks again!

I hope to see another writing of yours, hopefully in the not too distant future.

Wow. Just wow. I didn't leave comments on the earlier chapters because I was too busy racing to the next, but this is as good as anything I have read on this site (or anywhere else for some time, either). The story and the world building are impressive (oh, and the sex too), but this excels especially in its characters: rich, distinct, and compelling. One cannot help but love and root for them. Thank you so much for sharing the wonderful gift of your writing and imagination.

thank you for the story

i love this kind of stories, most of them that i find are unfinished, so this was a real gem to find, thank you very much for the story hope 2 see more if you have the time 2 write.

thank you for a wonderful story

I jus read the entirety of this story in one sitting. took me over 12 hours, but i'd say it was definitly a wonderful experience. I loved the characters, the scenery, the plot, the sex, everything was simply divine. I hope to read more from you in the future, and will definitly revisit this gem in the future.

All at once

I also read this in one night and it kept me up til the wee hours. Fantastic, well thought out, beautifully written book. Very impressive. This would make a really good first book in a series about these species, both their differences and similarities.

The best story

I don't normally leave comments, hence the anon heading, but as a lifelong reader of both erotica and scifi, I felt compelled to post. This is simply the best erotic scifi story I have ever read. Seems like it would also be a wonderful start for a novel story arc that I would definitely purchae. The characters are fully fleshed out with real feelings in a believable universe. For someone who, by your own admission, only writes part time, all I can say is that I look forward to your next posting. Please give me more. Thank you

excellent story

excellent story read it in one sitting please sir i want more

Very Creative

Thank you for sharing this tail. An excellent mix of action, intrigue and perspective.

Really enjoyed the story

Freaky enjoyed the story