Upon a Savage Shore Ch. 23

Well Done

Ripper, you wrote an excellent series. I enjoyed the entire story from start to finish. Great job and Keep writing.

Thank you!

Excellent finish: a little abrupt, but still nice.

If you write nothing else here, thanks.

Great story

Thank you for a great story. I enjoyed your work very much. I truly loved this series and looked forward to each new chapter. I don't usually comment, but had to commend you for all your good work. Thank you for taking your time to give us a complete story even if I hate to see it end. Take care. I hope to see you continue writing here. Thanks again!

Great Story!

I'm sad to see it done and over as I enjoyed it so much, but such is the way of life. I hope you do continue to write more here on literotica.

Really enjoyed this!!!! I know that in the future I will be rereading it at least once or twice. Thank you again for great writing and keep up the great work !!!! Looking forward to see more great work from you , although I don't know how or if it is possible to improve over what you have already written !!!!! Thank you again for a great story!!!!!!

A Most Remarkable Story...

Thank you for a most remarkable story. I've thoroughly enjoyed reading every chapter and it was easy to see the time and effort you devoted to this series. Like everyone else I hope we'll see more stories from you some time in the future. Upon A Savage Shore sets a new standard of stories in Lit. Thank you RipperFish.

Purrrrr

Consuming reading, thank you for the sharing the gift of your storytelling.

Happy but sad as well

Happy to see the end of a great story and sad for the same reason. I really hope you will write many more. But even if you dont, thanks you for sharing this with us. May your pen never run out of ink!

Excellent story

This was truly an excellent story. Great characters; good plot; good work on the species, their customs, and their languages.

Now, please, go to the dictionary and look up lie (intransitive) and lay (transitive). People lie down. They lay stuff on the ground.

Really appreciate your writing.

parthenogenesis

Story ends

Great job on one of the best stories Ive read here. Have to say Im very sad it had to end. Hope you get a chance to write something else and post it.

Q_Q

NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!

Y U NO RITE MOAR?!


I'm kidding.
But only sorta.

Excellent series, sad it's over, and I wish you the best of luck IRL.

One of the best scifi stories i have read in a long long time.

One of the best scifi stories i have read in a long long time. It had all the ingredients a good story should have. I shall miss that there will be no more chapters to read and hope that one day you will return to add more books to this story.

sad

that this is the last chapter. Thanks for the great story, easily one of the best I've read on this site.

confused

im not exactly sure you don't want some of your fans to follow your work elsewere seems a bit depressing

Thank You!

Thank you for writing a wonderful story.

I've enjoyed reading it from the beginning until the latest chapter.

Be assured I'll be looking for the next adventures.

Very Good

Sorry to see it end. Hope that you come back to this world sometime. Also will keep watch for any more that you might do.

...and we have a winner!

Thanks.

love it

This is one of the best stories I have read on this site in a long time. Loved it I give it a ten and two thumbs up. I hope to see more from you. Thank you for sharing such a great story, you are a great storyteller.

A wonderful tale! Enjoyed every episode,

Thank you

*****

Will be missed....

Enjoyed it thoroughly and will miss having a new chapter to look forward too.

Thank you!

The best story I have read here and the equal of some of the best commercial science fiction I have read.

I hope you publish more stories.
Thank you very much.

Thanks

I loves this story and if you are writing more stories of a sci if or fantasy nature I would love to read them even buy probably

4628

Hate to see this story end
Great read

Great story, really sad to see it end.

Thank you

A well written, fun story to read. Thank you.

The End?

Thank you so much for writing this story. I do hope you will change your mind, I would like some updates on them. Thanks again!

Thank you

Thank you for your time and for completing this story. You have no idea how happy I am that you completed this. Love it!!!!!

One of very few

This is an amazing story and one of the very flew that actually got finished and ended satisfactorily. Thanks for your time and dedication! You have a very great story telling mind, I hope you continue I'm with other stories or dabble in other genres too if you're ever inclined. We'll be waiting for your stories!

Thanks

Great story. Like all good stories, I am disappointed to have it end but it is a good ending. I sincerely hope you bring another story to this site.

George

Hate to see it end.

Your story has been a treat on this site.....I find fewer and fewer stories here that I enjoy, so I looked forward to each new chapter. Best of luck on your future writing.

Great Read

Thank you for taking the time to write and post your work here.

Thank you

I have enjoyed reading your story. I am sorry I may not be able to read others. Best wishes.

Good Story

I very much enjoyed reading your story. Thank you.

Thank You

Your story has been one of the treasures I've found on this site. I hope you decide to continue posting here, whether you continue with this universe and characters, or not. Good stories are far harder to find than one would wish, and authors able to create them are even more rare.

Thank you for this gem, and best of luck wherever you decide to post further stories.

Great story!!

Thanks for sharing.

A fine story

And finished in a fine manner. Fantastic job.

Great story

Thank you for sharing this story, I'm a little sad ( OK a lot) but I understand your decision about finishing this story and not continuing . Best wishes and hope you will reconsider your decision .

Excellent story

I've read every chapter on the first day it's come out. Great job and I hope you continue writing.

Yup

That was a good ending, I am happy with it.

Thanks

A bittersweet, heartfelt thank you for all your efforts and it's execution in this fine story. The imagery and character development are so engaging, it is small wonder your audience cries for more. Alas, real life is demanding and I wish you well on all your future endeavors and especially if they involve your writing. Fair winds and following seas.

Very well done story!

This is a well written story. Not just a sex tale ( by the way the sex was very well done) but a readable multi chapter story. Sci Fi was exciting and the amount of imagination was very respectable.
I do hope that this is not your last contribution to Literotica.
Well done!

Great ScFi Story

This is one of the very best ScFi stories on this site. It was the perfect mixture of action, adventure, and yes sex. I do hope you will share more of your work with us in the future. Thanks for a really wonderful read. It has been fun.

pubishing

You should have this story published because I bet you would have a best seller on your hands.

wondrous & WWTT

I agree - this should be published - if for no other reason than to get it exposed to a greater audience. wwtt = Well Worth The Time

great fun

Thanks, great ideas.

Thank You

Thank you for sharing your imagination with us all! I can't wait for your next story to come out!

There's a tear in my beer :(

One of the best stories on Lit! I do hope you will revisit this at a later date. All good things must come to an end,,, but why?? /cry :)

Outstanding!!!

Perfect story. Thank you for finishing it and allowing me to reader this wonderful story. However if you were to write other stories such as this, I would hope you would inform your readers :)

You suck!!!!

I refuse to believe that this is the last we will hear from this family!