Upon a Savage Shore Ch. 23

Yay

A superb story. Well done!

Wow... I hope you publish this. It's that good.

Seriously this is good. Only one jarring continuity error for me in the entire 23 chapters (added comment to that chapter). One of the best reads I've had on this site in a long time. Thank you.

This is one of the few stories that I hope to see removed from the site.

Removed so it can be published.

Thank you for sharing!

Ripperfish,
I'm so glad a friend of mine informed me about your writing and this lovely story. I enjoyed the flow of your story, the details you put into the story line, your creative skills in making the "worlds" and the "characters" so real and likable, and most of all your story telling abilities.

It was a joy to read from the beginning all the way through to the last word. "Upon a Savage Shore" was my first Sci-Fi story and I enjoyed it immensely. Thanks again!

I hope to see another writing of yours, hopefully in the not too distant future.

Wow. Just wow. I didn't leave comments on the earlier chapters because I was too busy racing to the next, but this is as good as anything I have read on this site (or anywhere else for some time, either). The story and the world building are impressive (oh, and the sex too), but this excels especially in its characters: rich, distinct, and compelling. One cannot help but love and root for them. Thank you so much for sharing the wonderful gift of your writing and imagination.

thank you for the story

i love this kind of stories, most of them that i find are unfinished, so this was a real gem to find, thank you very much for the story hope 2 see more if you have the time 2 write.

thank you for a wonderful story

I jus read the entirety of this story in one sitting. took me over 12 hours, but i'd say it was definitly a wonderful experience. I loved the characters, the scenery, the plot, the sex, everything was simply divine. I hope to read more from you in the future, and will definitly revisit this gem in the future.

All at once

I also read this in one night and it kept me up til the wee hours. Fantastic, well thought out, beautifully written book. Very impressive. This would make a really good first book in a series about these species, both their differences and similarities.

The best story

I don't normally leave comments, hence the anon heading, but as a lifelong reader of both erotica and scifi, I felt compelled to post. This is simply the best erotic scifi story I have ever read. Seems like it would also be a wonderful start for a novel story arc that I would definitely purchae. The characters are fully fleshed out with real feelings in a believable universe. For someone who, by your own admission, only writes part time, all I can say is that I look forward to your next posting. Please give me more. Thank you

excellent story

excellent story read it in one sitting please sir i want more

Very Creative

Thank you for sharing this tail. An excellent mix of action, intrigue and perspective.

Really enjoyed the story

Freaky enjoyed the story

first stories i read on here .

Please continue .

Continue

i would love if you continued because this is one of the only stories in a while that has held my attention for this long.

Damn Dude!

No follow up and no way to find you. That is really sucky. Really enjoyed this and want very much to find more of this quality. Since u r continuing to write will u pls throw us a bone. 😌

tried to hokd out on commenting until end well here it is:

AMAZING STORIES!!! I would pay 50$ a chapter if you published these and made a sequel. And of essence I have only a few things to say concerning my need or rather ADDICTION of these stories: MOAR MORE MOAR MORE MORE AND MOARMOAR. Though seriously I am extremely glad you finished this unlike Bowoodstock did with Kita'thalla which really sucks that he didn't finished but this story is one of the few stories I will read. I really only read them if they have cat humanoids. I know it is a strange and not to mention possibly creepy fetish. This is positivly one of the best stories I have ever read.
Darkness1120

ENCORE, ENCORE

One of the best SF stories I have read in a long time. Please do a sequel. Does not
have to be the same characters, maybe children or where a group of human women
are put in a like wise situation. You CAN really write!!

Lame

This concept and story is very epic, I love the character development and your writing style. Reading this caused me to be late going back to work off my lunch a couple times, and frankly it was totally worth it.

Rather lame to keep your other projects/writings a secret though, I would definitely enjoy reading more of your work. However, as much as I don't want to say it I can understand keeping this seperated from whatever else your working on.

Still lame though and I am just gonna keep pouting over it. Whether you continue this work or add another one onto this site I will keep checking back randomly. Hope to read more from you again.

Very, very satisfying

5* for the whole story!

One of my favorite childhood stories is Swiss Family Robinson. I love the story line of being castaway, surviving, building, and thriving on an unsettled land. The addition of joining and creating a family is especially satisfying. I'm happy the sex revolved around affection and love and not just rutting.

Thank you for a great read! I wish for more, but I'm grateful for what you did provide. I also wish you much success in all your future projects.

Reread

I just read the series again. Just as compelling and engaging as the first time. I would love to have the chance to read a sequel. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and vision.

Epic!

Oh my goodness! I just completed a marathon read of all 23 chapters, completely ignoring everything I was supposed to be doing today! Definitely worth it! Thank you for sharing this with everyone!

6/5

One of the best space age survival stories I have ever read.

3rd time re-read

This was a truely excelent story. Read it 3 times now and still just as good. Thanks for posting it!

More Please . . .

What a great story !
And I don't mean just the last chapter.
I couldn't stop reading it !
Thoroughly enjoyed it.
Do you have any other tales to tell ?

Great story.

Could easily be published by a standard sci fi publisher.
You should submit it,or at least package it up as an EBook.
5 Stars

Great tale!

A fine mix of life and interaction of diverse cultures and creatures!
WELL DONE!!

anon

very mysterious of you....

Outstanding!

I litterally read this whole series in one night. It's now 0457 and I've been up all night! If you're not all ready published then there is no justiced in the world. I have paid for stories that weren't half as good.

Drachengraff

Outstanding

If you do come back I think a good idea to do is using the root vegies that Liam likes has some sort of inzime or marker in them that lets him have children with his 3 mates.

It's over? Noooo!!!!!!!

No no no.....it can't be over....you MUST write more or your fans will have to hunt you down and hurt you until you write more about these marvelous characters!

Much appreciated!

Damn good story, thanks for putting in the effort

Amazing

I love this story. Thank you

Well done

This was very well put together and paced. I can honestly say I'm very glad to have read it after you finished writing it otherwise I would have gone nuts waiting for new chapters. Once again a great read

Well Done!

A good read. I especially enjoyed the lines from Aliens and Hunt For Red October. I hope you keep writing, but if not, thanks for the story.

Amazing

I spend my spare time scouring the Internet for stories like these and this has to be among the best that I have ever had the privilege of reading. I hope to see more works like this in the future from you. I hope to see a possible return to these characters in the future, but if not then this is an excellent place to end an amazing story. Keep up the good work and good luck with your future stories.

Wishes

Great Story and Love that you actualy took the Time to Develop the characters and tell a Story, while still keeping it a bit to Sexy for Casual Conversation lol. Just wish you would give us a Hint on Other Places to Read more of your Work.

Masterful Novel

The story was very well written and both interesting. It was difficult to put down as I read it.

3rd time

this is the 3rd time I have read this and it is still as enjoyable as the 1st time I read it.
Now I will have to go read the other story that someone thought you used as a basest for this one.

Sequel?

Have you considered making a sequel in this setting? Say, a war story about a joint Vespan, Human, and jZav'Etch strike group fighting the octopus-things? Or dealing with Carter's house some time after their colony has been established?

Write More Stories Please

You gotta write more stories. This is the second or third time I have read this. It's a good read, fast paced and interesting.
This comment is about all 23 chapters, not just the last one.

Keep it Up!

I found you through Lein Gellers Favs. Was a Very good read.. Hope you keep writing! gofishsteve@msn.com

Great Story!

I usually don't do scifi stories but am I glad I did this one. A fantastic writer, a fantastic story and a satisfied reader. Once I started, I couldn't stop reading. Thank You for a wonderful story.

should have

published this as an E.book
but then i guess you would have been forced into a series of books revolving around the characters or the civilisations you have created.
...
i have paid good money for Real paper books of 400 to 500 pages
that were less interesting & not as well written as this story
.
thankyou for sharing this with us for free

Glorious

This has been one of the best reads that I've found. Thank you!

Wonderful

I wish you would have kept this going it quickly became one of my favorite stories on this site I couldn't put it down no matter where I was I found my self thinking about what was going to happen next I finished all 23 chapters in two days not something I would normally do if you have any more like this I would love to read them

I'm sorry

... but your letter of resignation has been rejected. These characters, and this universe, are /far/ too good to abandon. This was an outstanding series. Thanks!

Now, please return to your typewriter.

Brilliant...

Thank you for a fantastic story. It has kept me riveted and enthralled. If you don't want to revisit these particular characters, then maybe write a series of stories about the future members of their adopted family and their path to greatness on both the human and jZav'etch worlds.

Thank you again.

great story really liked it all

That's great .pls keep writing such stories .really loved the plot .:)

Well Done!!

Thanks for sharing your story with us...really enjoyed it

Lost track...

of how many times I have read this...still a great read. I class this as a world class professional work of art - thanks for your time and talent