Upon a Savage Shore Ch. 23

Still Re-Reading

Wish you were still around and Writing, this was a Great Series, and much might have been done with its Realm. Still Re-Read it every few months because its just a good Story that keeps you Moving :)

Great Story

My thanks for this wonderful story and its concepts.

Confused

Why would you hide your other projects? It does not make sense to me. Why would such an amazing author hide their work from fans? I would love to read more from you. To see such amazing talent hidden is depressing.

Stellar!

pure genius. what an amazing series!
One of the best on Lit by far.
thank you so much for this.
i can't wait to read your next one.

I've probably read and reread this story 6 times since it finally finished. By far one of the best stories on literotica, thank you so much for writing such a good story.

this is one story that i did not want to see end

Greatness

Many thanks for not abandoning this series. Too many here go unfinished, even though they have greatness in them, and for that i applaud you. It is a shame your other works remain hidden from us. I know i wluld love to read more of your work. Regardless, my thanks to you for this great story! Cheers.

Outstanding!

Was about to read this fine adventure yet again when I noticed your bio was updated. I will be keeping an eye out for your new story. Welcome back!

Great story

I loved your story, excellent writing! This story is the kind of gem that I hope to find every time I start a story. But unfortunately like gems they are a rare commodity. Thank you for writing it and for finishing the story, too often I see story lines falter or stop with no ending.

My only request is that you make more like this, I will eagerly do a regular check of your account to see if you create any more.

If I could give you more than 5 stars I would.

I'm glad this story had a proper ending, unlike so many others on this site, but at the same time, I'm deeply saddened that it had to come to an end. Thank you for an absolutely amazing tale.

One of the best.

This is a great story. The ending was wonderful. Loved the fact that you didn't kill one of the wives to make it mord dramatic. This lesson should be learnt by some other writers :D

Great read.

excellent storie

The storie kept me interested and had a good flow, pleasently surprising, very good

Why!?

Why would I not say. Where ur other stories r? Ur a great author I would like to read more of your stories.

Damn it all!!!!

I told myself I wasn't going to cry when this great story comes to its end but now that it's here.....*silently Cry's*...what shall I do now in my free time

SAD

HI I have so enjoyed reading this story but i am sad that it had to end i spent a many afternoon reading it


thanks for all the joy that it has brought to me


ancel wheeler

Well, Damn it all to Hell...

Now I'm stuck with another story that I'm just going to have to read time and time again....
An excellent story... Well worth the time of reading... too bad someone couldn't study the biological tech of the Octopi and, using it, discover a way the races could cross-breed...

2 years...

on now and this is still one of the best I've ever read in several decades - thanks!

Top Ten!

Easily one of my top ten stories on Literotica. Great Job!

Serious question

On their space ship, did the cat women use a toilet or a litter box?

JK.

Hot wild animal sex.

Absolutely fantastic read!

Great story, had me up till 4 in the morning reading several times, so damn good! Keep writing mate, youll go far!

Exceptional Story

Absolutely brilliant, looking forward to reading your next one when it's finished

Brilliant story

I really enjoyed this story and the world you built. The characters and difficulties they faced were described far better than many of this genre. The story drew me in and I could imagine the landscape and weird animals that inhabited it.
The only issue is a nerdy one! I could not understand how a race that lived under water would be able to evolve to the extent that they were able to build electrical circuits etc as they would require a dry environment! Despite this I really enjoyed the story as I did the film 'The Martian' which was equally improbable. I am really looking forward to your next book.

Loved it!

Some stories make unbelievable jumps in the story line that make you think, "Yeah, that's a little out there, even for fiction." Your story, however, had a natural and believable flow. As a bonus, all the characters were genuinely likable! (Of course, Liam is my favorite. What I wouldn't give for a real life version. *rawr*) Keep up the good work!

wow!!!!!

I stayed home from work today to read your story. I must say you are a very talented writer and a visionary in the field of sci-fi and fantasy. Thank you very much.

completely

loved your story please keep writing. iwill look forword to finding more of your works.

paps

awwww

it ended...
sad panda

23 Chapters.....23 - 5 STARS ratings!!!!

Master of the "Cliff hangers", I salute you! Mind blowing Sci-Fi story telling. A true wordsmith drawing the reader into multiple characters and creating total empathy for each of their feelings. You are an artist of extraordinary talent. Thank for sharing it.

Impressive

I think this is one of the most well crafted stories I have found on this site. I grew up reading Sci Fi and have an extensive book collection (paperback of course!) and would happily add this to it. Well done.

Impressed

I have waited until finishing this saga to comment..... Your character development was great, creating folks that I became invested with. Each installment built upon the baseline premise. Characters who lived in my imagination just as much as any writer could produce.

Beautiful

This is the most extraordinary story I have ever had the pleasure to have read. This story has even surpassed Lord of the Rings as my favorite story. Every element was master crafted. The characters have made me fall in love with them and I wish that I will see this adapted into a graphic novel or comic someday. Finishing this story has brought a tear to my eye. Thank you.

excellent

really enjoyed this story. well written and focused on the characters and expanding plots. fast paced :)

definitely recommended.

Positive integration

Well crafted and enjoyed the characters and multiple species. Thank you for writing and sharing.

A great read

Overall a VERY good SciFi story. Please consider additional story lines in this universe. Caught a few grammatical mistakes along the way but the flow of the story, the layout of the story line was great! In the future if you need help with editing, especially auditing the verbiage syntax I would be glad to help. (Grin) especially if it gets me a chance to read more of your excellent stories early.

Enjoyment

Your story was very well written and your characters were excellent will love to see you doing some more in this field hope you do another story

Paps

damned good

i am mildly disappointed there wasn't some kind of genetic engineering done so his mates could get pregnant but who knows what future stories hold,you did say that the aliens they were fighting had advanced biological tech.

A masterpiece. I agree with previous commenters and the author that this would not adapt well to cinema. However, it would make a superb graphic novel. If I could draw, I would even now be seeking the author's permission to adapt this story as a serial webcomic or the like.

As it is, I can only offer my highest praises and then see what else he's posted. :)

once again...

(I've lost track of how many times) I have thoroughly enjoyed this thrilling tale - can't thank you enough for your time and talent!!

11 stars out of 10 ...

An excellent story, great characters, very good premise ... awaiting more stories from you !!!

Kudos

I cannot remember how many times I have read this story over from beginning to end. It is a superb tale with characters you just can relate to. Kudos for your exemplary work and thank you.

Totally Agree with the others

Your story is excellent and well rounded. I look forward to more of your stories. And Yes, I too have read it more than once. Stories this good are rare.

Please consider revisiting this universe, You have made a good start on it.

Out-Frickin-Standing!!!

I waited to comment until the end of this imaginative tale. Really great work, should be published, I'd pay for a hardcover. Liked the characters, the imagery was quite good without being overly wordy. Really impressive piece of work!

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