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by ariesgirl11/09/14

Well Dice sure isn't using her new power wisely as he was told by his guardian angel.

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by Anonymous11/15/14

Ehh

I think you should weite in third person,it makes the story harder to follow. As well as that, it didnt flow very well, you just jumped to different ideas, not a good storyline either, but since it is your first, i believe you can make ammends.

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