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My kind of hairdresser!!!!
Loved it. So erotic and sensual... Maybe they'll be back for a makeover maybe... Thanks.
Excellent story telling...
...and terrific writing overall, Cat. Well done!
My pussy is SO WET after reading this!!! Curiosity is killing me...
Learning from her writing about girl sex
My cock is rock hard, and I can't wait to get my wife naked. I want to caress the nape of her neck as she humps my thigh. I want to taste her lips and nibble on her tongue. I can't wait to hear her use words like fuck and pussy. Words she never uses except in the the moment of making love while begging for more.
Thank you so much!
Exquisite
Your sense of pacing, of leading up to the climax was extraordinary. Their personalities were well-defined and nicely shaped. Altogether, exquisite.
Slow, erotic, lovemaking
Your writing was excellent, the characters were well developed and believable. The tension made my want to rush through the story but it kept me handing on every word. A well written and highly erotic story.
An erotic masterpiece; well worth a 5 star + vote from another 'ANZUS CFNM" group of your fellow erotic writers.
Now well over Eighty myself; A masochistic but former genitally shaven 'Naked Male' sperm donor unattached intellectual retired gentleman resident property owner] from coastal New Zealand. A life-long naturism practitioner [A genuine Nudist Reverend] & since my retirement, increasingly interested in promoting several Dominant Feminist causes. EG: No longer able to be milked for any viable sperm samples, I volunteered to castrate myself, immediately removing [both useless] testicles whilst [erection only] reducing the dimensions of my penis. RSVP to revdickt01@hotmail.com ASAP?
ECELLENT!!!
Superb writing. Thank you for not going straight for the sex scenes or scenarios that are really far fetched. Reading your stories have inspired me to start writing again. I look forward to reading everything you have written and future stories to come. Well done my friend.
Conservative Sara next?
Sara may will be next to disabuse her of bisexuality once she sees her mother is taken and that she is a natural submissive like Mom. Sara will get the,appropriate haircut she didn't plan on getting and will easily submit to it. Lesbian contacts at her university will help reinforce her feelings both ways.
Yet another amazing lesbian seduction of a married woman
Utterly believable Cat....wonderful stuff! Thank you so much....you capture the excitement and nervous anticipation of the mature woman so well. And it's set in England...!! She could even be my own dear wife Sue in that situation !! (I wish.....). Andrew x
Very erotic
What a captivating and erotic story. I enjoyed every bit of it.
Wow...just, wow!
Such a magnificently beautiful story. I especially love how Lindsay speaks, and uses that communication as foreplay as well, or better, than her physical actions. I want to be touched and made love to like that. Thank you.
Wonderful
Such a sensual, slow seduction. Yummy
Such a beautiful Build up
This story is so well written, i felt as if i was there. The build up was wonderful and my panties were so wet by time i got to the 5 pm appointment. xxx
An outstanding and beautifully written story
Men get criticised for not 'understanding woman' .Perhaps if we all read Cat's stories, woman would no longer be from Venus, we would understand them more. Why do I say that? Because Cat writes in such a wonderfully. descriptive, emotional way that it is easy to not only believe in the characters, but to know them, and by knowing them one understands them. I understood exactly how the characters were feeling; their nervousness, timidness and at times sheer embarrassment were all there out on display, making the characters human, natural, and allowing them to be related to as the story progressed. When one understands with a character, one can emphasise.
Whilst not a female myself I would now perfectly understand how a hitherto straight woman would feel if they were in that same situation, and I can assure you it is enlightening when one gains that understanding.
I have no idea whether there is any truth in this story, it is so well written it is impossible to separate the fact from the fiction. That is a testament to the writer, leaving the reader to wonder 'Hmm, I wonder...' but in really the truth is irrelevant. What matters is whether we understood, sympathised, emphasised and above all enjoyed the story. My response is a resounding YES on intellectual, emotional and physical levels and I can't ask from anything more from a story or an author.
Thank-you Cat x
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