All Comments on 'The Neighbor'

I cute little story, perfect for Halloween. The writing is very good, as usual with this author. More, please :)

I loved the circular nature of their dreams.

I don't understand why it doesn't have a higher rating.

Now I know why! Wonder what happened to the witch's kids. Great story.

I dearly love your stories. So forgive me for this little nit-pick.

"My breath was most likely fowl so I. . . ."

"Fowl" refers to ducks, chickens, and the like. "Foul" is something bad: Offensive to the senses; revolting. Having an offensive odor; smelly

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Were bad little pigs bewitched to look like bad little boys.

but I will never accept tea from a neighbor! lol

But...

"The man came out of the water bone dry. I was kind of amazed since he had started completely submerged and slowly walked to the shore. He was wearing a black suit, white shirt and red tie that made him look like a banker. I stood up from the chair to shake his hand, but he refused. "Take care of my little weasel," he said with a smile. Then he pushed me off the cliff I didn't know was there. "

...x3 was perfection. 5*

Wow says it all! What a wonderful story!

It got disturbing after that... how quickly he forgot his wife... ok I'm going back to finish now, had to say this

One of the only stories posted up here that is actually disturbing to the point of scary. Not too sure about erotic as sex were rather a small and minimal theme.

Another great story

What

The ending made me laugh out loud. Different than your others. Still great though. Thank you

Ok... you got a chuckle out of me at the end... lol

-jaye-

I think that Dreamcloud could write about a rock or some drift wood and provide a great story. This story like the others that have been written, are fresh and captivating and have ,kept me glued to the story from start finish even it takes all night.

Thank you.

Mike, you write some weird stories but they are all very entertaining. The story had me going for awhile but I love happy endings especially the final line Hansel and Grettle---the witch killers?

sure wish you were still adding to your collection of delightful stories

I would not have finished the story except that I’ve read so many stories by this author. I was shocked by the quick turn to sex. Well I stuck it out and I’m glad I did.

FUNNY & AWESOME!

Good story,something a bit different.

The last line made the story shine. :)

Hell, Mike alias DreamCloud, I need you to write much more stories. You're just fantastic.