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Songs I Was Too Drunk To Finish

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by playcatch10/19/14

Great title

Alcoholics Synonymous is clever. Life as a game is cliche. The poem has impact. Paper asshole is an interesting image. Entendre'd slip is kind of cool. I would like to see this poem edited to eliminate or rewrite the easy choices (this too shall pass, half empty/half full, lessons learned, life as a game, etc.) and the abstractions. A single illustration trumps a dozen abstractions.

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