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thanks
Another 5* from this satisfied reader.
Something's missing
Sorry, I only give it a 4. It's not bad, it's just not what I'm used to from you. It seems, at least IMHO, that since you came back from taking a break, something's missing in your stories. I thought it was just 29 at first, but now you've had three after the break and it's the same. It's hard to put my finger on it, but they just don't seem to have the oomph the first 28 did. Still, better than most stories here. I'm beleiving you're just out of practice and will soon be back in form.
last two stories
have been getting away from the crafty character sex ups and clever interweaving of chapters. the hot sex is being replaced with too much who cares about daily life stuff. please get back to heating up the characters and less drone living.
OOPs!!
Chapter 31 This one
and Lindsay cvooked bacon and eggs in her bra and panties
Might have been better if it said this--- Lindsay was wearing her bra and panties and was cooking bacon and eggs
I don't think you can cook bacor oreggs in a bra and panties
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