Thanks for sharing your intimate details with your lit fans. You did an excellent job helping your readers feel the excitement you experienced (along with all the other emotions, too!), G
It surprised me how much I enjoyed writing this story and sharing it with the readers. There are more areas to explore with Melanie and Jack. I look forward to sharing them.
Love the way the story flowed. Prefacing it by stating that it's somewhat autobiographical really helps bring the story to life and increases the imagination.
The story is well narrated and progressed with a grip. The edition is great...everything thing is happening without passing time. This is first encounter by a family orinted mature woman....need to go further how things are proceeding....
Liked mature facesitting
I had an affair with older married woman who I adored and often begged for facesitting. This reminded me of her, 14 years my senior.
Good Read***
Thanks for sharing.
Hello Melanie
Thanks for sharing your intimate details with your lit fans. You did an excellent job helping your readers feel the excitement you experienced (along with all the other emotions, too!), G
It surprised me how much I enjoyed writing this story and sharing it with the readers. There are more areas to explore with Melanie and Jack. I look forward to sharing them.
Perfect lead in
Love the way the story flowed. Prefacing it by stating that it's somewhat autobiographical really helps bring the story to life and increases the imagination.
Magnetic Encounter.
The story is well narrated and progressed with a grip. The edition is great...everything thing is happening without passing time. This is first encounter by a family orinted mature woman....need to go further how things are proceeding....
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