Living with My Aunt

drugs

Get rid of the drugs u arse

You write like your doing the drugs while your at the computer. You need to find something else for your inspiration.
Let me see if I have this right, your Aunt is pregnant, she's doing marijuana, hash, opium and meth? What a screwed up way to bring a child into the world, already hooked on drugs. I'm glad this is just a figment of your warped imagination.

Worst story I ever read.

Grammar spelling. Drug use. I don't usually make negative comments. This was bad.

what a load of crap

I have never read sich drivel.... Get a life and lay off the drugs
.sex is cool.. Drugs are not. 71EB

seek help.

You need help in many ways. other commenters have told you anonymously, I'm a registered user and I'm going to tell you. You are seriously screwed up. Literotica readers have a great ability to see fantasy and support different sexual desires. Even drugs like Alcohol and marijuana are constant factors in stories here. However, your story has absolutely no use as a fantasy piece because of the horrible writing, grammar and situation. Not to mention your condoning serious drug use by a pregnant woman. The second is go to school and learn how to write. Then get and editor who would tell you to never write such complete trash.

Do I hear

Amen?

To all the foregoing comments?

Amen!

Garbage

And here is the worst line in the whole story: "TO BE CONTINUED SHORTLY"
don't even bother wiring more of this trash.

Utter trash

This has to be one of the worst stories I have ever tried to read.

Complete break with reality.

So, he loses his parents and siblings in a car accident... But hey, no problemo! He's going to live with his aunt who he's had a crush on! Within a few hours, he's getting high on his drugs. (Who packed that box, anyway? In a normal world, all that shit wouldn't get "boxed up" by movers, or by someone moving: It would be hand-carried by the owner. But hey, why attempt to be realistic in any way, right?) Within a few hours, he's laughing and joking, and, oh right, and FUCKING his aunt. Because, that's what you DO after you bury your parents and siblings who just died in a car accident.

Follow the advice from this and other comments: Stop writing stories. Go seek professional psychiatric help. Do it as soon as you "realistically" can.

re: TO BE CONTINUED SHORTLY

I'm not sure which is worse, that you couldn't be bothered to warn people this wasn't a complete story before they opened it or that you're going to continue this mess.

OMG!

Pregnant woman taking drugs. No Bueno. I was imagining a nephew getting them both, or them all fucking each other, but not a woman consciously harming her unborn child.

dont wast your time...

Not worth the read. You're a lousy writer, don't know how to develop a story and you have issues. If you do decide to continue this story, it will have to end in a long-distance relationship as nephew and Aunt serve their well-deserved hard time in prison for the death or brain damage of the baby

not quite enough

Dont think you were quite stoned enough when you wrote this fucking garbage
You were still breathing
Get A fucking life,, and for your sake i sure as hell hope it has nothing to do with writing
Maybe start over in preschool and try to at least graduate that this time

don't worry

No it WON'T be continued.
Check the profile, banned already.