very seldom do I rate a story with a *5 ! I enjoyed this story so much I wanted to give it at least a#9!!
Your charactor building was so good. You took lots of time on who & what Toby is. The situation & history was so real to life.
Thank You for a great story well written & enjoyable!!
A treat to come home from work today and find a DGH story in the new submittals. Sometimes a "happy ever after"' story is a refreshing respite from the daily grind!
Welcome back, DG - Right back to form. Sweet, romantic, beautiful story full of hot, horny sex. Bravo! 5* & favourited. Ken
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Anonymous10/21/14
why is it???
why is it that the black man always has to take a white man's wife or girlfriend??? can't anyone write a story where the black man dates a single white woman and finds love that way??????
its insulting to black men and white women alike to have a black man come in and take a white wife from a man who is his friend. it shows a lack of character on both their parts. i guess that black men don't see white men as friends and are always out to get one over on them however they can....... and ofc white women always go crazy for the bbc.............
show some originality next time plz
So sad Anon didn't understand this story. I read it as an extremely Respectful character with no unjust ego or pressure, not taking advantage of anyone. DGH has a talent for writing a 'complete story line' with more background details than most and I'm proud to include "Toby" as a Fav. Thanks for sharing so much with your many fans. Always Hot with No Humiliation.
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Anonymous08/25/16
Very good plot
I really liked the plot. I think further detail and more dialogue would've made it great.
English
Thanks, again DG Hear
You've been entertaining us for years, and I really enjoyed your latest submission!
Fun Story
A delightful near farce which underlines the fact that some times we do not even communicate with ourselves.
Good Stuff!!!
very seldom do I rate a story with a *5 ! I enjoyed this story so much I wanted to give it at least a#9!!
Your charactor building was so good. You took lots of time on who & what Toby is. The situation & history was so real to life.
Thank You for a great story well written & enjoyable!!
Very Pleasant Romance
A treat to come home from work today and find a DGH story in the new submittals. Sometimes a "happy ever after"' story is a refreshing respite from the daily grind!
Mate - One of your best
Welcome back, DG - Right back to form. Sweet, romantic, beautiful story full of hot, horny sex. Bravo! 5* & favourited. Ken
why is it???
why is it that the black man always has to take a white man's wife or girlfriend??? can't anyone write a story where the black man dates a single white woman and finds love that way??????
its insulting to black men and white women alike to have a black man come in and take a white wife from a man who is his friend. it shows a lack of character on both their parts. i guess that black men don't see white men as friends and are always out to get one over on them however they can....... and ofc white women always go crazy for the bbc.............
show some originality next time plz
Oct Anon Should read more ...
So sad Anon didn't understand this story. I read it as an extremely Respectful character with no unjust ego or pressure, not taking advantage of anyone. DGH has a talent for writing a 'complete story line' with more background details than most and I'm proud to include "Toby" as a Fav. Thanks for sharing so much with your many fans. Always Hot with No Humiliation.
Very good plot
I really liked the plot. I think further detail and more dialogue would've made it great.
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