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A Lord's Desire

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by Anonymous

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by 6147010/22/14

Amazing story...i hope you continue it

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by Hethen12910/22/14

well done

Just a simple tale that could have gone in romance just as easily. Does not really need a second chapter it feels very complete.

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by Zenigen10/22/14

Great story, I loved it. I advise finding somebody to be an editor to help you out with proofreading, though.

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