All Comments on 'Bella's Halloween Treat'

Will there be more? It was AMAZING and the way you ended it... there could easily be another chapter. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER!!

WOW !!! Having once had a similar OOOPS cock-sliding-in moment but in only a semi-public place, I can tell your story was even hotter with the daddy daughter and party scene. Very nicely written. Can't wait for more.

Bella sure got a treat. Really nice story.

Liked it! Once went as a Celery Stick for my date's Bloody Mary!

Loved it got me very wet dreaming of Daddy fucking me in public. Please more more Daddy Daughter fucking!

3 stars for once you got me tingling it was over.

I like her willingness to face up to whatever punishment, but with just enough sauciness that you can tell how she will sweet-talk him into mitigating it. A real Daddy's girl, this one. The only thing better would be if she got knocked up.

Oedipus complex for the win

Very good.. more please..

Oedipus is mother-son. Electra is Daddy-daughter.

but very enjoyable!

... and I liked it!

My-oh-my.

That was ingenious !

Looking forward to the ride home & punishment...and the continuation of this hot story.

Needs to follow it up with the ride home and after they get home

lucky dad wish it had been my cock you had taken.

With his legs together and her facing away from him her clit would easily be bumping up against his leg. Have you never experienced that position?

I can not wait for the next part of this story!

Great job!

and to think it happened in that position is so unlikely as to make it . . . .

well never mind, she was just trying to get off after all, and in one way, she/they did.

"Electra"fying.

This story was amazing! When I finished it I was shocked to see it was only one page! It was so hot and well written, I felt like I'd just read a much longer story. Please, please, please write more! This theme, any theme, just write more of the hot stories I know you can write! (Please?)

add more pls!!!!!!!

Fun! great job...

pretty pretty please <3

Can not wait for more. Loved it.

this was so good, I want to read more. There should be a sequel!

Oh my god I loved it

I want one with uncle

This is a fantastic story of a daughter making her father get lucky, it woul be excelent for you to write a second story, weather related (prefferable) or not. You have a natural talent with words and should continue to work with it weather it be in a erotic setting or something else.

Cheers.

This story should be made into a video.

I hope you write more soon! :)

I really want to know what happens next please oh please write more

Please make a chapter 2 to this story. It was amazing and I really want to know how he punishes her. Please

some points lost my focus, like when she is bumped, i'd have liked more insight on how her mind handled it, yes she was aroused and started doing movements, but in a crowded room there's so much tension, also would have been interesting to know the feeling of the father, I get he was disappointed, but to hold back the urge to orgasm, to try and not look at the body you're having sex with, but natural urges are there... it was a very good story, I enjoyed it a lot, but that's why I'm critiquing... like watching the best movie ever, you just want more of it, more everything.. haha

this was sooooooooo very fucking hot, had me hard as hell, i hope she changes his mind in you next story

"Enough. Off of me. This never happened and you will most definitely be punished."

"I dont think so old man! You're the one that forced your daughter to wear something that left her half naked, you're the one who forced me to come to this party half naked, you're the one who kept pushing his hard cock, hard from having incestuous thoughts of the half naked daughter in front of you, into my ass constantly ALL night, you're the one that kept feeding an underage girl booze all night when you know Im not 21. You're the one that pulled me down on your lap with your cock out and called it 'an accident', you're the one who had your hand on your dick, guiding it under the edge of my panties and into my pussy when all you had to do was pull it sideways, so you're the one who slowly got me super horny all night, 'grooming' my pussy so you could fuck it, and once you got what you wanted and I was in ecstasy and couldn't stop you were the big, strong man that didn't easily push a 120 pound girl off your dick till after you blew your load and started feeling guilty and decided to push all your guilt and blame on ME! It happened daddy. You shoved your big, thick, long, hard cock deep into your young daughters tiny hot slippery wet, needy pussy and happily enjoyed me riding it till we both came like gangbusters! Be my daddy, but more importantly be a man and take responsibility for your actions and emotions... And you will most definitely NOT speak to me like that again!"

I wanna read about how daddy disiplins her

Fantastic HOT story! Well done but I want much more.

It was so hot. I absolutely would love a story about her punishment. Very well done.

Seems to cut short a bit to soon. Could be much better if it was a bit longer with a more consolidated ending

I love Halloween Parties! Especially with Daughter and Dad.

Daughter deserves to be spanked and punished.

5 stars!

Why do the really good authors only have one story? Thank you for sharing great read

Kinda dumb, don't you think?

Too trite !