Bella's Halloween Treat

More?

Will there be more? It was AMAZING and the way you ended it... there could easily be another chapter. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER!!

Good Trick, Great Treat

WOW !!! Having once had a similar OOOPS cock-sliding-in moment but in only a semi-public place, I can tell your story was even hotter with the daddy daughter and party scene. Very nicely written. Can't wait for more.

Trick or treat

Bella sure got a treat. Really nice story.

Quite a stem on his fig leaf!

Liked it! Once went as a Celery Stick for my date's Bloody Mary!

Hot!

Loved it got me very wet dreaming of Daddy fucking me in public. Please more more Daddy Daughter fucking!

Hot but too fast

3 stars for once you got me tingling it was over.

Cute, if a bit short.

I like her willingness to face up to whatever punishment, but with just enough sauciness that you can tell how she will sweet-talk him into mitigating it. A real Daddy's girl, this one. The only thing better would be if she got knocked up.

Freud

Oedipus complex for the win

Oh yes

Very good.. more please..

Electra Complex, actually.

Oedipus is mother-son. Electra is Daddy-daughter.

implausible

but very enjoyable!

Silly...

... and I liked it!

Incredible, I think.

My-oh-my.
That was ingenious !

Looking forward to the ride home & punishment...and the continuation of this hot story.

Needs to follow it up with the ride home and after they get home

puzzled

how can you grind your clit on his leg if his cock is up your pussy?

daughters pussy

lucky dad wish it had been my cock you had taken.

His legs were together duh!

With his legs together and her facing away from him her clit would easily be bumping up against his leg. Have you never experienced that position?

I can not wait for the next part of this story!

I hope theres more

Great job!

There must not have been much material

and to think it happened in that position is so unlikely as to make it . . . .

well never mind, she was just trying to get off after all, and in one way, she/they did.

"Electra"fying.

So much heat in such a little package!

This story was amazing! When I finished it I was shocked to see it was only one page! It was so hot and well written, I felt like I'd just read a much longer story. Please, please, please write more! This theme, any theme, just write more of the hot stories I know you can write! (Please?)

add more pls!!!!!!!

Aw

Fun! great job...

part two pleeeaase

pretty pretty please

Part 2

Can not wait for more. Loved it.

so good

this was so good, I want to read more. There should be a sequel!

Hot as hell I'm so wet

Oh my god I loved it
I want one with uncle

This is a fantastic story of a daughter making her father get lucky, it woul be excelent for you to write a second story, weather related (prefferable) or not. You have a natural talent with words and should continue to work with it weather it be in a erotic setting or something else.

Cheers.

video

This story should be made into a video.