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it's good but if she put on the panties and was not on the pill it will be very good
Response to good comment
Why do you say that? I could probably understand your comment about Gina wearing panties creating a better story, but having Gina be on the pill is essential. Without the pill, they would have to use a condom or risk pregnancy. Fantasy sex has no condoms so the pill is the way to go. Thanks for the feedback though.
Fan fiction or story
You should make a story out of this or at least think about writing fan fiction because this could be a great story. You are a really good writer .
Response to Fan fiction or story comment
Thank you for the feedback and strong praise.
I appreciate it.
I'm actually working on a major project right now.
In the meantime, feel free to read all of the other erotic stories that I have posted
on this site.
Feedback is always welcomed and appreciated.
Good but lacked biting
Good story but he should have bitten her while fucking.
Response to "Good but lacked biting" from LarsM69
Good point, LarsM69. I should have thought of that when I first wrote and published this story over 2 years ago. Oh, well. I'll definitely take note of that if I ever write another Halloween themed story. Thanks for the feedback. Always appreciated.
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