All Comments  for

The Taming of a Slave

byLoudPet©
All
Comments (2)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Dutchgirl8210/22/14

oh wow

Now thát is betrayal in one of the ugliest kind, 'saving' someone so they'll deliver themselves. Good start of drama though.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous12/14/14

Good start

It's definitely an interesting start but it could use some minor editorial tweaking

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to The Taming of a Slave  or
More submissions by LoudPet.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel